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| Spring time, clear night, full moon shining, stars all aglow. It’s still a little cool, but nothing to keep us from being outside in our whirlpool. You're looking great in your bikini especially the way the moonlight bounces off your body and gives you an elegant glow. We don't have to worry about anyone seeing us, not with a privacy fence up around the yard. We are alone enjoying the night, just snuggling up to one another in the whirlpool sipping on our drinks of bubbly, celebrating just being together on such a special day, your birthday. We set our drinks down so we can drink from each other’s luscious lips with the most enticing of kisses. You climb onto my lap to face me so we can make the kiss even better by slipping your tongue between my lips. We are just sitting there as one in a wonderful embrace enjoying one of our most passionate kisses. You can feel me start to loosen your bikini top and as you become free of its confinement you feel your nipples harden as the slight cool breeze blows across them. A little moan breaks free from your lips. You're feeling oh so good and oh so relaxed in my arms. My hands start to caress your beautiful face and trail their way down to massage your now freed breasts which draws your nipples further into their little peaks. You're now kissing me with everything in you. All your passion is ready to be released. Our tongues are flicking in and out of one another's mouths in an amazing dance of their own passion. You're ready to let go of all senses and just give yourself to the passion and ecstasy that we are partaking in. You can feel yourself tingling between your legs as your fire grows inside you and even though you're in a whirlpool you know you are now wet in your most sensitive of regions. While feeling your own arousal grow, in sitting on my lap you can feel the bulge in my swim trunks grow. You want to feel it in your hands. You want to free it of its enslavement. You climb off and have me stand so you can free the desired member. You have now freed me from my burden of enslavement. You take me into both your hands and feel how hard I have become. I am at your mercy while you have me in your hands. You start to lightly stroke me to get me even harder but you can't wait to taste me inside your mouth. You are able to hold off long enough to lick the entire shaft up and down and all around. Once finished and you have reached the tip again you happily devour me and take me into your waiting mouth and savor the taste of me. You can't get enough of my taste and you bring me so close to the point of shooting into your mouth but at the last possible second you remove your lips from my now completely hard cock. You want me to tantalize you now so we can share our most explosive moment together. You want me to take each nipple in my mouth one at a time and just suck, lick, and bite them to keep them hard. As I do this you feel me removing your bikini bottom. I start to slowly rub at your now aching clit. The moans and our breathing have become so much more intense. You're starting to rock in motion with my hand at your clit. I position you in front of one of the whirlpool jets and let the water coming out of the jet run over your clit while I pay attention to that very special sensitive spot on your body. This new sensation is fueling your fire even more. You can't stand any more. You need to feel me inside you. I now need to feel you squeeze me. I sit back down and have you position yourself perfectly on my very stiff cock. You gently and slowly bring yourself down on me but only so far just to tease me with entry to you. You do this over and over again until you have taken me all inside.
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| Comments to Story: Birthday Surprise |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| So very romantic!! Could almost feel the emotion between the couple...keep it up! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 344
| Beautiful. Didn't seem to make much mention of the birthday though. But a lovely, romantic and sexy story. |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 3
| Very good story, ^_^ although a bit choppy with the sentences and little mention of birthday. But a good story, nonetheless. <3 |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Definitely a good story line/ Really promising. More editing would make this very strong writing.
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