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Winter Rendezvous
Old 21st Feb 2007 13:30
storm
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It's a cold winter night, wind blowing hard, snow covering the ground. I walk into the lounge room hand in hand with you. I lead you to a bearskin rug on the floor in front of the fireplace with that as our only light and one of our sources for heat but we know we can make our own source of heat just being in one another's arms.

We set our glasses of bubbly down and then get down on the rug on our knees and just passionately kiss one another for what seems like an eternity. Our passion grows even greater, so much so that we no longer need the fire to keep us warm but we stay there because the light is hitting each other so erotically. We break our embrace, not that we want to but so I can remove your blouse and position myself behind you. I give you kisses around your neck, cheeks, and lean your head back against me as I kiss your wonderful lips. Our tongues meet in the middle and share a wonderful dance together in each other’s mouths.

My hands are caressing your sexy body and you let out a moan as I cup your breasts with my hands; all this time our kiss hasn't broken. I start to pull the straps down from your elegant lacy bra so you can feel my hands on your breasts just caressing them. You feel my fingers take each hardening nipple and lightly roll them between my fingers making them grow harder. Our kiss now breaks so you can turn around in my arms. You are asking me to take each nipple in my mouth so I can lick, suck, and bite them. Our breathing is getting more out of control by the second. We are lost in each other’s arms, each other’s passion.

You are now removing my shirt so you can run your hands over my body as we kiss some more; each kiss is getting more and more passionate. We go to take off each other’s pants at the same time but you are able to get mine off first and really take notice of the mountain inside. I free you of your pants and see how wet you have become. We are longing to taste each other so much we can't help but peel off what's left of each other’s clothing. We are now both completely naked, completely warm despite the cold outside. The warm light of the fire bounces off our bodies giving us an erotic glow. We continue our kisses but our hands can't stay away from the most sensitive of areas.

We move to lie down as we continue to kiss, hands roaming freely over each other’s bodies, caressing, teasing. You can't take our teases anymore. You want some attention on your clit to ease the aching and throbbing. You want to be licked. I lower my head down to your treasured area; the smell from your arousal is intoxicating and just drives me even crazier. You want badly to be licked so you force my head down on you ordering me to lick you. I oblige by first teasing your special spot then bringing my tongue full bore on your now very pronounced clit. Your moaning is growing more and more intense as I just take my tongue and move it around in a circle, zig zag, up and down, side to side all over your clit then go back to your special spot to give it some more tongue loving.

You have come so close to releasing but you don't. You want to wait for me so it can be together. You decide instead to take matters into your own hands and mouth and position yourself to get my mountain to grow even bigger. You start by licking the entire shaft and you hear me moan, giving you knowledge that you know I am loving what you are doing to me. You continue licking the entire shaft all over until you stop at the tip. You look up at me and smile. You take my now rock hard cock in your mouth, back and forth in it goes as I can feel the wetness from your tongue having its say in matters, flicking the tip as my cock is heading back like you are going to remove it but you don't. You just continue using your mouth and tongue to bring such great pleasure to me.
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Old 12th Mar 2007   #1
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Default Re: Winter Rendezvous

Storm,

Very good effort with this. It was a loving story.

I especially appreciated your solid sentence structure.

For the next time, you might consider having someone help you edit with particular emphasis on voice, tense and vocabulary.

Introducing some dialog would be an excellent way to share what the person is experiencing or what they desire.

Hope this helps.

In loving kindness,

Lushi
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Old 15th Mar 2007   #2
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Default Re: Winter Rendezvous

This is good. It's a nice setting, and the story develops well. Winter, in front of the open fire. A definite win for me.

A little more creativity in the language and this would be a fantastic story.
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