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| After three hours she stopped reading and looked at the cold and untouched coffee in front of her. Putting down the papers she got up to make a fresh pot. Aimee stood at the counter and impatiently drummed her fingers as she thought about what she had read. Limits list, contracts, expectations, positions, respect and trust -- all just words before but now forming into something else. Ah, it was ready! She filled the big mug full of the hot, fragrant infusion and sipped it as she went back to the living room to open the first box that had been delivered with the documents. There was nothing like the sound of tissue paper especially when it revealed an enticing collection of panties and bras all of different colors and styles. The next carton was heavier and full to the brim with shoes, stilettos! Shoe boxes and lids strewn everywhere, exposing high heels of 4 to 6 inches, stylish, chic and sexxxy! Now the final package! Her curiosity peaked, Aimee opened it to find too many designer label dresses. She was astounded at the variety – formal, daytime, sensual, chic down to a one-piece toga-style wrap-a-round. She sat back on her heels in the embarrassment of riches before her but as she stood to begin to try them on, the phone range. Aimee answered, "Hello." "Did you get the packages I had sent to you last night?" a deep voice asked. Excitedly, she said, "Yes I did! I was just about to go and try them on." "No, don't do that. I want you to select a pair of thong panties that you think will please me. Next take the red dress and the red shoes and wear them to work today. I want you to look your best for when I see you. Remember, you do not know when that will happen but I will." Aimee paused for a minute, thinking about what he was telling her before she heard herself saying, "Yes, Sir". "Very good little one, I will contact you later about this evening". She started to ask who he was but the phone went dead before she could. Aimee went about the task she had been assigned, took the selected clothes back to her bedroom and laid them out. She stripped off her shorts and the tank top, spending time looking at her body. She took out her lotion and after putting some in her hand she slowly applied it to her legs. As she spread the lotion on her skin, she massaged her leg muscles enjoying the feeling of strength that was there. Her hands then moved to her feet. The feel of her slippery fingers moving between her toes and along the ball of her foot was sheer pleasure. Next, the lotion was applied in tight circles to her neck and shoulders. Smooth hands moved down her chest, massaging her breasts, squeezing and pulling on her nipples. She tugged hard on her nipple rings and felt a shock run through her. Aimee paused, looked at the bedside clock and decided that if she kept this up she would be late for work, so with a sigh she finished putting on her lotion. After slipping into the cream colored thong she next picked up the dress. Looking at the cut and style she felt a little uncomfortable going without a bra because of her erect nipples, knowing that her rings would show. She donned the red dress, its hemline falling just below her knees, she could feel the fabric against her already excited and sensitive nipples making them all the more erect. Aimee finished her hair and makeup. Then with the red shoes on her feet, the mirror reflected not the gothic beauty that she used to imagine herself being but something else -- something fresh and lovely, desirable and wanting. It staggered her for a moment, but shaking her head she hurried to catch a cab to work and made it just in time for the afternoon staff meeting. Aimee's Editor-in-Chief, Carl, specifically addressed her.
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| Comments to Story: Aimee Part 4/final chapter:The Transition |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 43
| I absolutely LOVED this entire story! I loved how you captured the feeling of gothic sensuality, how you seamlessly combined dream and wakeful reality, and how delicately you handled dominance and submission. Everything about it was done masterfully and eloquently. I applaud your writing, sir. It has been a pleasure! |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| I am in total agreement with MWXK. Excellent job, night, and a terrific reading experience. Thanks for sharing! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Tennessee Posts: 588
| I am completely at a loss for words Night. I have never seen the more enticing and provocitive side to dom. You have shown me the dark beauty behind it all. I thank you good man. And state for the record that in my opinion, you are a master in your own right...... a master story teller. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Illinois Posts: 416
| Thank you folks, you are making me blush. Comming from such wonderful readers and writers mean a lot. Again Thank you |
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
| You are exceptionally remarkable Night! You did exactly what you set out to do and that was produce an amazingly erotic story to stimulate the minds of all of those who read it! Bravo! *pulling down my shirt a little - exposing a small portion of my breast* - can I get your autograph? |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Wel done, Night!! Gosh, I am not really into dom/sub...but oh my word...this was just amazing to read. It hit all the right notes. Hey....sticking my tail out...can I get your autograph here?? :-D |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Illinois Posts: 416
| Thank you lily and kitty...and I would be happy to sign anything you want to offer...as long as I get to reallly take my time holding it...smile |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 0
| Thanks so much for this story. It is better than the first. :-D |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Illinois Posts: 416
| You are quite welcomed, it did make a difference when I rewrote parts of it and edited it. Hope you enjoy all you read here sexyreddragon |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Another piece of nice writing.
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