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The Erotic Adventures Of Erica Hunt- Chapter 1: "Horton Hires A Ho" (Page 2)
Old 1st Nov 2008 13:25
Umbriel
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"W-well", I answered, "w-were you planning on taking my coat or w-will you just stand there copping a feel w-with your hand?" He gulped again. He managed to undo the top button, then the next one down below my breasts and then the final one below my crotch. He straightened up in triumph, expecting me to hand my coat to him. I tapped my foot and yawned: "Is this going to take a real long time? W-we've only got an hour". A twelve-watt light bulb seemed to go off in his head:

"Oh", he said intelligently and opened up my coat, preparing to push it from my shoulders and down my arms. But when he got a look at what was underneath he gasped:

"Oh my fucking God" he said. I could have chastised him for swearing but I took it as a compliment to me and 'G Boutique'.

His eyes bulged as they feasted on my bustier, and with ample reason. It was black, it was leather and my breasts billowed over the top and sides like fluffy clouds. I watched his eyes glide down the zipper from the clasp that nestled in between my bosom to the bottom of my rib-cage where the leather ended, then over my flat stomach to the stripper's thong that fastened at the sides with Velcro. From there his eyes leapt to the mound of my pussy where they lingered longingly, then down my legs to the thigh-high leather boots I'd bought and struggled into earlier.

"Oh my fucking God", he said again. Well, at least he had religion.

"So are you gonna take my coat or not?", I asked, hands still on my hips.

"W - well..." -

"Look, Tiger, don't use words that start with 'w', O.K.? Like 'What' or 'Where' or 'Wow'. Whatever you do, don't say 'Wow' That would take fowever and we've only got an owah. Now drop your drawers."

"Wh - wha ", from Mr. English language.

"Now, now, what did I say about 'w's ? Tell you what", I said, "how 'bout you just shut up?" He gulped.

"And drop your fucking pants!" He hurriedly complied. Fingers shaking, he undid his belt and the button of his pants. He pulled down his zipper and tugged his trousers over his ass and, leaning forward, pulled them down his calves and off his feet. Stupidly he held them out to me.

"Put - them - on - the - chair", I articulated slowly as if to a 12-year-old, which wasn't that far off. "And your shirt", I commanded. Then I told him:


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Old 2nd Nov 2008   #1
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Now that is one naughty girl! Don't wanna give it away.
The writing was measured to fit the tale. Nice work Umbriel.
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Old 3rd Nov 2008   #2
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Great Story Umbriel. This is going to be a great series
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Old 3rd Nov 2008   #3
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Thank you both - Dionysius and Illuminatus - for your encouragement.
I really appreciate it.

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Old 5th Nov 2008   #4
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Wow... that's all I can really manage. Wow. That was a wonderful tale and I cant wait to see what adventures she finds herself in next.
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Wonderful Job Umbriel I to can't wait to see what happens next
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Thank you seker and Shy,
I really appreciate your feedback.
Thank you all for making me feel welcome here.
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