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| The Gathering Part One: Shy's Retreat |
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| A stunning brunette walked through the airport, turning heads with every seductive step. Finally she reached the airport bar, dropped her bag beside a table and removed her black waist length jacket laying it on the back of a chair. Just as she got settled a waitress came by and took her order. She crossed her legs and leaned back slightly in her chair. If you looked close you could tell that she needed a little vacation,.not a long one just enough to take the edge off. Through her hazel eyes, behind the lavender lense of the sunglasses, she scanned the bar watching the half smiles, winks, and inviting nods while, she nervously played with her necklace. She pulled her purple cardigan close covering an old "I survived Dover AFB" t-shirt and began recalling the last time she had been on vacation. She had finally met a longtime online friend and they had very interesting and fun filled trip that was entirely too short. The waitress returned with her order and she sipped her Seven and Seven. She looked at her watch and saw that she only had few minutes left to catch her next flight. Excited and anxious she couldn't wait, she was one flight away from her Aunt Ruby northern California retreat. Her aunt was a free spirit, fun loving, and hyper sexy woman in her mid sixties. "May have your attention….May have your attention Please!!!!" Authoritative voice barked over the airport intercom. "All flights are canceled due to severe weather…"If you have any further questions about rescheduling please consult your airline personnel…thank you for using O'Hare airport." The heartless droning voice finished. The brunette sat shocked, couldn't believe what she was hearing. Before she could really react her phone began to ring. "Hello." She said, as she answered without regard to who was calling "Shy, it's Aunt Ruby." the voice with calming warmth said. "Hey, Auntie!!" Shy hoped her eager cry would cover the disappointment at the canceled flights. "What's wrong honey, you sound a little down?" Ruby wasn't one to pussy-foot around. She wanted to know what was up with her niece and she wasn't going to be steam rolled into believing everything was fine. "They just canceled all the flights, Aunt Ruby!" Shy replied with sadness at being delayed a reunion with her favorite relative. Ruby never asked questions the needed answering. Ruby always told Shy to be herself, life was happier that way. Life was hard enough without adding any pretense, so just enjoy it the best you can. Shy admired and respected these qualities in Ruby deeply. Ruby suspected as much from watching the weather channel. She was glad she took precautions in case this happened. That was the thing about Ruby, she always thought ahead. "Just go to the front and take a taxi to Hyatt Regency. Everything's already taken care of." Ruby instructed. "Really, Auntie?" Shy laughed. How like her aunt to understand her needs before she understood them herself. "Yes it is, Hon." Ruby so wanted to take the stress away from her niece. The only way she knew how to do that was get her out here and make her relax. "The whole top floor is yours." Ruby thought of something just before she was going to say goodbye. "Don't you have a friend somewhere out there?" "Yes, I do," A devilish smile came across Shy's face. The image of her tongue gliding across the rigidness of her friend's nipple caused a warm tingle down below.
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| Comments to Story: The Gathering Part One: Shy's Retreat |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Hot!! Can't wait to read part 2! :-)
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
| Wow mangus... is that the same you? *peeking under your hat* You have finally put it all together and presented us with a deeply arousing story. Nicely written, edited and presented. Keep up the good work! I'm proud of you! |
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| Chat Moderators Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Great Job Mangus !!! I love it , very hot ......I can't wait for the next chapter
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Tennessee Posts: 588
| Wow. That is a good choice of words Magnus, perfect for this story. I love the detail and loving care you took with this first chapter and hope to see the same heated thoughts in future chapters.
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Central Pennsylvania Posts: 558
| VERY hot Mangus! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!! *pants*
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 344
| The only thing I can say too.. WOW! That was HOT! From your first entry to this one Mangus, your work is just unrecognisable. This is fiery, well written, nicely paced and really sensual. I can't congratulate you enough... mindspired should be really proud of how you've developed. CANT WAIT for more!!
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| Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
| Absoulutely delicious! I love how you juxtaposed Shy's fantasy with the action of your story. You never leave out any of the little details, allowing your reader to experience each moment your characters do. It was a wonderful read.
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