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 18th Sep 2008 22:44
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| Crescent Motel I got in trunk and drove off. I looked back and I could see her looking out the diner window. I got to edge of town and saw a motel. I parked my truck and got a room. I opened the door of the room threw my stuff on the bed and headed to the shower. First, I took a cold shower, and then took another one to ensure that I was truly cooled off, but it wasn’t working well at all. That waitress really had me going. No one had ever said anything that to me. I put on a pair of shorts and lay across the bed. I turned on the TV and began mindlessly flipping through the channels I couldn’t get the waitress out my head. Damn it!!! I kept thinking about how nice it would be to wrap my lips around her beautiful breasts and then to slowly swirl my tongue around her tender nipples. I would gently suck nipples teasing them slightly with tongue until they started to hardened. I have been with a woman before I can only imagine the intensity. I know this may sound shallow, but I would really like to know what it is like to have my cock sucked. I sat wondering if this woman was for real? If so, I will be receiving my first blowjob tonight. I looked at clock, I still had time. I’m so nervous I don’t think I can go through with it. Wait, maybe she was just teasing an innocent virgin. Hold it. How would so know that I am a virgin? Is it stamped on my forehead? That’s it I can’t take anymore. So I quickly got dressed and opened the door. As I began to walk out the door she was standing there looking right at me. I froze right there in my tracks, my brain was telling me to run while my legs were standing still. Silently, we walked into my room. Without saying a word she undressed exposing those luscious breasts. I dropped to my knees and pulled her close and began sucking her breasts like there was no tomorrow. Finally, I gathered my thoughts and began making my fantasy come to life. Slowly, I gently licked and sucked her nipples. As they began to harden the breathing deepened. She began to softly moan. I couldn’t believe what was happening to me. My hopes, my dreams, and my desires came rushing through every nerve in my body. Suddenly, she smashed my face between her breasts. I began to feverishly lick the inner portions. Her breathing became heavier and her moans louder. She stood me up and pulled down my pants to my ankles. She grabbed my cock and squeezed it gently. She tongue flickered along the length of my cock, and then rested slightly at the head. Shockwaves ran through my body. I pulled away shaking. I could barely catch my breath as I fell on the bed. She rose slowly. The look in her eyes slowly melted away my fears. I shivered from her touch as softly caressed my face. I looked into her eyes deeply; I knew that I belonged to her. I tried to explain that I never been with a woman before. But she gently placed her finger across my lips as I began to speak. She finished undressing me then laid down next to me caressing me slowly, she began softly whispering my ear. Her lips were like velvet as she gently showered my body with kisses. She laid her body on top of me. She began licking and sucking my nipples. She worked here down to stomach, and then back up to my nipples while she was slowly stroked my cock. She squeezed my balls gently each squeeze applying more pressure. She stopped briefly, looked into my eyes and began licking my inner thighs. She glided her hands up my body until we were face to face. I feel her warm breath as tongue glided from the bottom my neck to the edge of chin. She caressed my face as she whispered, “Will you grant me the honor of being your first lover?” Passion raced through me like waves. Out of breath, I gasped “Yes!” A smile glistened, that lit her face. Gently she pulled my head towards hers until our lips met. Tenderly we kissed. Tenderness exploded into passion as our tongues interlocked. It was like we were meant together. Each kiss was more passionate than last. Together, we breathed deeply resting our head against each other, panting. Her tongue flickered gingerly around the edges of my ear. Then she whispered, “I want to take my time with you and teach you how to be a good lover” She moved to the edge of the bed and motioned for me to come to her. She stood me up and positioned me so that my cock would between her beautiful breasts. She slowly wrapped them around my cock then began to gently move back and forth. I was so excited that pre-cum had began to ooze from the tip of my cock, which allowed my cock to slip easier in and out of her luscious breasts. Our pace quickens and my thrusts were deeper. She began moaning. I began hitting her chin with tip of my cock. She gently lowered her head and allowed to enter her mouth. The warmth of her mouth was mesmerizing. I thought was going to cum right then. She worked her tongue in circular motion while she held my in place. Her moans deepened as I began gingerly fuck her mouth. Her breasts fell as reached and grabbed the cheeks of my ass and sucked the head of my cock hard. Then she opened mouth and slid it down over half of my cock She continued squeezing the cheeks of my ass while I continued thrusting my cock deep in her mouth. She pulled my cock from mouth, breathing heavily as she stroked it. She lowered her head and began sucking my balls. I didn’t know how much more of this I could take. All I knew that I was hanging on as long as I could. She wrapped her fingers around the base of cock and started taking deeply in her mouth. Each time she would take my cock deeper and deeper until I had reached the back of her throat. As my cock reached the back of her throat her moans were louder than ever. She began rubbing her pussy as sucked my cock. The more her passion increased the deeper her fingers went into pussy. My body was tightening up, I believe I was at the point of no return. She started squeezing her breasts as she took the entire length of my cock in her mouth. As she reached the bottom, her tongue was licking the underside of my balls. She did this three times. On the third one, I grunted that I was cumming and she pulled her back to the head of my cock. Then wave after wave of cum shot from my cock, as she continued sucking the head. I never came that much in my life. She took my cock from her mouth and swallowed. Stroking and squeezing my cock trying to get last drop of cum from it. Her tongue flickered over and over the head of my cock keeping it erect. After cumming like that I thought I was going to pass out. She looked up at me smiling, and then began sucking my cock again. This time she wasn’t holding back. It seemed like in a matter of seconds I was cumming again. The strain was more than I could bear. I collapsed on the bed. She crawled up next to me. I held her in my arms and we kissed passionately. We stared in to each others eyes as we embraced. We lay on the bed caressing then drifted to sleep. I was woke up by a knock at the door. I looked at the bed and I was alone. I grabbed some shorts and answered the door. It was the front desk clerk. She stood there smiling, then said “Well Sir, are you ready for round two?” I stood there thinking I should have left Marin County years ago | ||||||
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25th Sep 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
|  Re: Crescent Motel Wow! This was very hot and loving. It had many imaginative elements that are seldom found in other stories. I really like the way it was original and not formulaic. I could feel the action. Good job Mangus!
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26th Sep 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Re: Crescent Motel Good idea for a story, Mangus. Although, you need to watch your grammar a little. There are some words missing that mek a few of the sentences hard to understand. Edit, edit, edit...lol Otherwise, it is a pretty good story!
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27th Sep 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 342
| Re: Crescent Motel Cool. Mangus, this is a good story. It's exciting, and it's got good imagery. Dion's right in that it is original, and it doesn't explain the unnecessary. I guess it's the story of a nervous first time, and nervous first times are a little quick and intense, which is kind of how the story felt, so it worked. For any longer pieces, or more in depth work, you will need to look harder at the grammar, as at times it drew my attention away from the story, to the actual words instead, but this is promising. Good work.
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27th Sep 2008
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: Crescent Motel Mangus, There is a good program in Word that will help you with the grammar that is very easy to use. I will give you the details privately. Sorry I didn't point that out originally. My assessment above I stick by as a story: this is a good idea and it is fun to read.
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27th Sep 2008
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 13
| Re: Crescent Motel I enjoyed the interaction between this virgin and his first lover.I liked how she started out gently then ravaged him to the point of no return. He must have had the best orgasm ever! She sounded very experienced in what she did to him and I know he'll never forget it. Thanks for the loving and sexy read.Looking forward to more from you! Tori  |
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