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 4th Jan 2009 18:26
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| The funny thing about writer’s block is that it attacks right in the middle of a good session. Everything is going rather smooth. Then you’re slightly distracted and it is over. It’s kind of like when say the wrong thing to your girlfriend and gives you a look and the rest is history. This time the block was pretty heavy. None of the usual tricks and methods that I use to break it were working. I heard a noise I looked out the window I one the neighbor tyrants in my yard. I opened the door and stared at him like a crazy man. The basketball had rolled underneath my truck and the tyrant was crawling under my trunk to get it. My instinct was to yell at him and scared the piss of him. However, I resisted and walked outside to see if I could help. The ball had got caught underneath my oil pan. I jumped in the trunk and moved about 10 feet closer to the house. That did it the ball was loose and the tyrant grabbed the ball and ran off. He turned around and yelled back “Thanks, Mr. M” I couldn’t believe that was the first they said something other than a profanity in months. I looked up and shot me the bird as he jumped on his back and pedaled off. I really considered chasing his sorry little ass, but I looked down at my fading gut and bare feet and figured that it wouldn’t be worth it. So I took off after him, four blocks, six yards, and at least seven rather large dogs later I decided to quit. While standing there panting like a fool, I yelped out “You little fucker, when I catch you I will dip your head in a thousand empty toilets”. Yeah, so I am a little rusty on the whole insult thing. I turned started back home. The neighbors were standing in their yards shaking their heads …..Sighing. I finally got back to my yard and drug my tired ass back in the house. The phone rang. “Hello.” I answered “Man, you aren’t going to believe this shit!” Zeke replied. Zeke is my right hand man who I trust with my most secret of secrets. “What?” I replied “Eartha Kitt is dead!” He said “Do Not Be Fucking with me, man!!!... You know that’s my girl!” I warned
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5th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,189
|  Re: Writer's Block Wow!! Barring some edits, this is one HOT story!! Nice job!!
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7th Jan 2009
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| Chat Moderators  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Re: Writer's Block Hot !! I totally agree with Kitty......great job Mangus *smile*
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12th Jan 2009
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|  Re: Writer's Block yes, this is a good one! [scribe] |
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15th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 44
| Re: Writer's Block I enjoyed this one Mangus. I could really envision what it was you were trying to say. Love it when a character dictates the story and you're just a long for the ride to type it. Can't wait to read more. <3
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24th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 934
| Re: Writer's Block Hey Bro! I figured out what makes your writing so great. Yes, I used the word, great. You describe the real thing. You don't slip in quick and easy formula statements that so many do like "I took her there and she moaned more than she had ever known." None of that chit. I can make a list of your totally original descriptions and situations that I can see in my mind as really happening in my house or yours, but not in some cyber dreamland, man. Really happening right there ......damn! Look at this one bro: "those beautiful desire filled eyes." Yes exactly! That's what she had! I mean it says to me, "mmmmmhhhhmmmm, she had eyes for me!" lmfao! Or the whole section from "You’re dressed in a baggy sweater and jeans" to " exhaling through your teeth and licking your lips slowly" I can see so vividly and can FEEL how sweet she is on you!!!! I mean FEEL it! The rest of it is like that. My Man you can write. Don't ever believe you can't! You want a grammar and spell checker? Send it to me and I'll put it through the process for you. Ain't no damned spelling gonna stop a gifted writer and friend of mine from "speakin to your people!" Somebody pass the basket while I figure out what i gotta do with this whopping ding dong this story gave me. Yo, mind sendin' Ms Kitt my way? She always did it for me too! Hell I'm old enough to remember her form before she was catwoman. She could always "puuurrrrrrr."
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27th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: the shadows Posts: 387
| Re: Writer's Block I'm not sure that work is worthy of the kindness of your words..... My thanks to all of you....I'm glad that you enjoyed it Mangus
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9th Sep 2009
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| mindspired Member  Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 12
| Re: Writer's Block Very interesting story, and although there were some spelling and grammer errors, it certainly was hot!
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