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 4th Jan 2009 19:26
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| “Channel 5, mother-fucker …channel 5!” then he hung up I turned on the news and heard the broadcast. Shocked I fell in my chair. My head was hanging not really understanding what just happened. I couldn’t believe this shit, the original Catwoman…man. My cock started to get hard as I began remembering her running around in that skin tight leather suit. I swallowed hard and licked my lips as the vision of her crawling on all fours, looking thirty different ways of hot played vividly in my mind. Then I begin imagining you in that skin tight leather suit crawling towards me ……slowly…..seductively. I undid my pants and removed my cock and stroking as the image played in mind. I was sitting there stroking; as you came through the front door. You’re dressed in a baggy sweater and jeans. God damn you look so fucking hot. You look a little tired from your trip, but you manage to smile at me. You walk over to me and lean down and give a long tender kiss. You move my hand from my cock and replace it with yours. You strokes are slow and deliberate. We begin kissing again deeply. Our tongues dance to their own song as you stroke me still. We break our kiss our foreheads touching, panting trying to catch our breath I mutter" I missed you" You smile and kiss me tenderly. You look down at my cock and say" Is this for me baby?" I nod, breathing hard as I run my fingers through your hair "Really, this big hard cock is mine" You remarked “So big....so hard....” you continue, exhaling through your teeth and licking your lips slowly Then you move around and open your mouth wide taking in my cock. You take over half in your mouth and stop. Your lips shudder as your mouth adjusts my size. Your take your hand and grab my cock at the base and you brace yourself with your other hand against the table as you lower your mouth. Your groans are deep and long. You start squirming so I can tell that you are wet. You lowered your mouth a little more nearly touching my pubic hair. You groan again and bury your nose into my hair. You held it there for a moment and released it. You pant hard for a moment squeezing my cock hard. You look at me with those beautifully desire filled eyes. You slowly lick your lips before taking me back in your mouth. This time you take me the all way down pausing only once. I moan deeply.
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5th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
|  Re: Writer's Block Wow!! Barring some edits, this is one HOT story!! Nice job!!
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7th Jan 2009
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| Chat Moderators  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Re: Writer's Block Hot !! I totally agree with Kitty......great job Mangus *smile*
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12th Jan 2009
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|  Re: Writer's Block yes, this is a good one! [scribe] |
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15th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 44
| Re: Writer's Block I enjoyed this one Mangus. I could really envision what it was you were trying to say. Love it when a character dictates the story and you're just a long for the ride to type it. Can't wait to read more. <3
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24th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: Writer's Block Hey Bro! I figured out what makes your writing so great. Yes, I used the word, great. You describe the real thing. You don't slip in quick and easy formula statements that so many do like "I took her there and she moaned more than she had ever known." None of that chit. I can make a list of your totally original descriptions and situations that I can see in my mind as really happening in my house or yours, but not in some cyber dreamland, man. Really happening right there ......damn! Look at this one bro: "those beautiful desire filled eyes." Yes exactly! That's what she had! I mean it says to me, "mmmmmhhhhmmmm, she had eyes for me!" lmfao! Or the whole section from "You’re dressed in a baggy sweater and jeans" to " exhaling through your teeth and licking your lips slowly" I can see so vividly and can FEEL how sweet she is on you!!!! I mean FEEL it! The rest of it is like that. My Man you can write. Don't ever believe you can't! You want a grammar and spell checker? Send it to me and I'll put it through the process for you. Ain't no damned spelling gonna stop a gifted writer and friend of mine from "speakin to your people!" Somebody pass the basket while I figure out what i gotta do with this whopping ding dong this story gave me. Yo, mind sendin' Ms Kitt my way? She always did it for me too! Hell I'm old enough to remember her form before she was catwoman. She could always "puuurrrrrrr."
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27th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: the shadows Posts: 390
| Re: Writer's Block I'm not sure that work is worthy of the kindness of your words..... My thanks to all of you....I'm glad that you enjoyed it Mangus
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9th Sep 2009
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| mindspired Member  Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 12
| Re: Writer's Block Very interesting story, and although there were some spelling and grammer errors, it certainly was hot!
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