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 4th Jan 2009 18:26
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| “Mmmmmmmm….damn, baby you taste so good!” you moan, as your head begins bobbing up and down on my cock taking it all the way every other suck. My hand were wrapped in your hair while sent me one step closer to the edge. You release my cock and strip out your clothes quickly. You sit on my lap and begin rubbing your pussy across my cock. “It feels so good, baby”. You moan as you grab my cock and slowly lower yourself on it. We groan in unison as my cock enters your sweet tight pussy. You lean forward bracing yourself on the table and raise hips up and down on my cock. I lay back and enjoy the ride. You’re in total control. You cry out in passion as my cock plunges deep in your pussy. You begin licking your nipples I pull you back as I slide down in the chair and begin thrusting hard and deep. You push your nipple in mouth. I sucked it in unison with my thrusts “Oh my god” you groan, as you hold my head to you crying out with each suck and thrust....your hips rolling hard against mine. Your body starts to shake with passion and your pussy begins to gush a little. I lean you against the table taking you from behind. I begin thrusting deep…...pausing....and thrust again. I reach underneath your leg and slid my finger into ass, as I pick up the pace of my thrusting. You begin panting hard. “HARDER!!!...DEEPER!!!....” you groan I stop playing around. I spread your legs a little wider and lower myself for maximum depth. I begin thrusting deeper ...deeper, until I reach the sweet spot in back of your pussy. I hold it there and roll our hips together for a moment. I start thrusting hard and fast. My boys begin slapping your pussy I'm so deep..... I find my rhythm and my finger back your ass. I finger your ass in unison with my thrusting. You cry out and start pushing back against my finger and cock....hard and fast with each thrust. Your pussy is really gushing now, and starts to talk to me. OOOOO…I love it when it does that …damn!!! You knuckles turn white, as you grip the edge of the table. You knees buckle and your pussy grips my cock as you cum.
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5th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
|  Re: Writer's Block Wow!! Barring some edits, this is one HOT story!! Nice job!!
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7th Jan 2009
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| Chat Moderators  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Re: Writer's Block Hot !! I totally agree with Kitty......great job Mangus *smile*
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12th Jan 2009
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|  Re: Writer's Block yes, this is a good one! [scribe] |
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15th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 44
| Re: Writer's Block I enjoyed this one Mangus. I could really envision what it was you were trying to say. Love it when a character dictates the story and you're just a long for the ride to type it. Can't wait to read more. <3
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24th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: Writer's Block Hey Bro! I figured out what makes your writing so great. Yes, I used the word, great. You describe the real thing. You don't slip in quick and easy formula statements that so many do like "I took her there and she moaned more than she had ever known." None of that chit. I can make a list of your totally original descriptions and situations that I can see in my mind as really happening in my house or yours, but not in some cyber dreamland, man. Really happening right there ......damn! Look at this one bro: "those beautiful desire filled eyes." Yes exactly! That's what she had! I mean it says to me, "mmmmmhhhhmmmm, she had eyes for me!" lmfao! Or the whole section from "You’re dressed in a baggy sweater and jeans" to " exhaling through your teeth and licking your lips slowly" I can see so vividly and can FEEL how sweet she is on you!!!! I mean FEEL it! The rest of it is like that. My Man you can write. Don't ever believe you can't! You want a grammar and spell checker? Send it to me and I'll put it through the process for you. Ain't no damned spelling gonna stop a gifted writer and friend of mine from "speakin to your people!" Somebody pass the basket while I figure out what i gotta do with this whopping ding dong this story gave me. Yo, mind sendin' Ms Kitt my way? She always did it for me too! Hell I'm old enough to remember her form before she was catwoman. She could always "puuurrrrrrr."
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27th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: the shadows Posts: 390
| Re: Writer's Block I'm not sure that work is worthy of the kindness of your words..... My thanks to all of you....I'm glad that you enjoyed it Mangus
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9th Sep 2009
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| mindspired Member  Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 12
| Re: Writer's Block Very interesting story, and although there were some spelling and grammer errors, it certainly was hot!
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