A Wish for Santa

Shy · 5th Dec 2008

WOW!!!!! damn Lily I have missed your stories so much

and thank you I now know what to ask Santa for

kittykat · 5th Dec 2008

Ok....your stories are not supposed to make me cry.....but my goodness, you did the most awesome job of making me emotional, and totally turned on.....what more could you wish for??

seker · 5th Dec 2008

Simply amazing Lily. Like I should expect anything less. This one should go down in Mindspired history.

With a story like this.... who would not know what they wanted for Christmas?

Dionysius · 24th Jan 2009

Lily I tell everyone that if they want to read the best erotica writer I know of, they should read you. I must tell you that this not only was filled with sheer heat, masterful writing style full of brilliant metaphors, but it had feeling that, like Kitty said, brought tears to my eyes. The fusion of those three elements made this far more than just an erotic story.
I could feel along with the little girl inside the main character
and celebrated when she got her wish. This was BEAUTIFUL.

I swear you could sell this to a short film maker as a script. I am hard pressed right now to think of anything you have written that was this good---and that says something for me!

peppercorn · 25th Aug 2009

Brilliant, evocative descriptions weave a lacy path through your marvelous story. The reader can really feel what is in the mind and body of your character. Great job on this well-written winter's tale.

5th Dec 2008	#1
Shy Chat Moderators Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392	Re: A Wish for Santa WOW!!!!! damn Lily I have missed your stories so much and thank you I now know what to ask Santa for __________________ No Boundaries.....

5th Dec 2008	#2
kittykat Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191	Re: A Wish for Santa Ok....your stories are not supposed to make me cry.....but my goodness, you did the most awesome job of making me emotional, and totally turned on.....what more could you wish for?? __________________ Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like you do when nobody is watching!

5th Dec 2008	#3
seker Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Tennessee Posts: 588	Re: A Wish for Santa Simply amazing Lily. Like I should expect anything less. This one should go down in Mindspired history. With a story like this.... who would not know what they wanted for Christmas? __________________ Some say Knowledge is Power. I say sometimes Knowledge is a Weakness.

24th Jan 2009	#4
Dionysius Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939	Re: A Wish for Santa Lily I tell everyone that if they want to read the best erotica writer I know of, they should read you. I must tell you that this not only was filled with sheer heat, masterful writing style full of brilliant metaphors, but it had feeling that, like Kitty said, brought tears to my eyes. The fusion of those three elements made this far more than just an erotic story. I could feel along with the little girl inside the main character and celebrated when she got her wish. This was BEAUTIFUL. I swear you could sell this to a short film maker as a script. I am hard pressed right now to think of anything you have written that was this good---and that says something for me! __________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog)

25th Aug 2009	#5
peppercorn Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556	Re: A Wish for Santa Brilliant, evocative descriptions weave a lacy path through your marvelous story. The reader can really feel what is in the mind and body of your character. Great job on this well-written winter's tale.