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| They had first met on one of those online dating sites. After that initial contact, they had exchanged pictures, chatting whenever they were both online at the same time, talking about everyday things. He was obviously not one of those horribly suggestive creeps, he looked cute, and he seemed very nice, so she kept chatting to him, and then one day they were talking about food, and he commented that he loved the taste of salty things. Her response when he typed that shocked her a little - her mind immediately conjured an image of herself spreadeagled and naked on a bed, and him kneeling with his head between her legs. And, while his original comment seemed innocent enough, his next was a little less so, "Perhaps you can suggest some salty things I might like to taste" he typed, then he logged off. Her heart pounded at this new direction of their interactions, but the next time they chatted (a few days later) it seemed like it was all back to normal, so she relaxed. Until the very last thing he typed before logging off that night, "Perhaps if you're a good girl, I will get to taste something salty sometime soon." At that comment, she gasped and felt an immediate flood of wetness between her legs, the same image again filling her mind, but this time her wrists were tied together above her head! She responded to his message immediately, even though she knew he was already gone (he would see it when he next logged back on), "Umm… If I'm a good girl?" she asked, sure she must have misunderstood him. She had read a story about bad girls and their punishment a few months ago, and it had intrigued her, but also frightened her a little too, and here he was casually mentioning that forbidden world! His response was waiting for her when she next logged on, and it was even more shocking! "Yes, that’s what I will do if you are a good girl. But if you are a bad girl; I will tie you up... and do the same thing, except I will do it over and over and over again, and you will have no control over what I do, or what else happens." Reading that... she felt a clenching deep within her and moaned out loud. How could he possibly know this very recent but still secret fantasy of hers? Over the next few days there was no contact between them, until finally they were online at the same time, and he asks her if she is ok. She replied that she was fine, and then they just continue chatting about everyday day things as if the “salty” discussion had never occurred. The next time they chatted, he asked her if she would like to chat on the phone instead, and she agreed, so he gave her his number saying it was her decision when to call him... so she called him straight away. For some reason she was quite eager to increase her contact with him, and he was nice, and there was no further sexual innuendo when they spoke on the phone, so they exchanged mobile numbers at the end of the call, and over the next week they called and messaged each other every day. Feeling relaxed and a little adventurous one day, she decided to suggest they meet up for a drink somewhere after work, and he had agreed.
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| Comments to Story: Salty |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 899
| A deliciously tasty treat, served up with expert skill, as always. Incredibly well formed story with a sweet easy-going tone and a great introduction to a dom/sub encounter. Thanks, Angie. Great job.
__________________ Spice is the wonder and excitement in your world. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 2
| Thanks... its not Angie tho! This was my first attempt |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 899
| Sorry I got the name mixed up on your wonderful story. I confused the author name with the story below yours. Either way, your story, Salty was a delicious treat to read! You did a superb job on it. Again, my apologies. I hope to read more stories that you write soon. --------pepper
__________________ Spice is the wonder and excitement in your world. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 304
| I agree with Pepper, Willingly...this was a wonder story of introduction to Dom/sub...It was written masterfully and had very nice flow it. I look forward to the next addition to this story ...Thank you for sharing it.
__________________ Just because the road is rocky dosn't mean that your spirit should be rocky too. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 2
| Thanks Gypsy... appreciated |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 851
| Having read a lot of lit in this area I must say this was a refreshing beginning. It has a decided and controlled pace, the characters are sketched just enough to develop the plot, and it clearly is leading to another installment, though it could stand on its own too. So the writing and plot is clear and mature. The scenes around the "salty" theme are deliciously sexy and she is a naughty girl indeed!...and he is a lucky man! She sounds like the perfect understudy.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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