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| So now she stands outside the pub, waiting nervously, then she sees him striding towards her, a huge grin on his face. "Hello there," he says, hugging her briefly and kissing her cheek, but avoiding her lips. “How nice to finally see you in the flesh!" he exclaims. She blushes in delight and murmurs something vague in response. She is clearly still a little nervous so they sit at an outside table and have a few drinks until he sees she is relaxed once more. He tells her he has cooked a delicious curry earlier that day, just in case, and he invites her back to his place for a few more drinks and something to eat. She agrees immediately. He opens the front door for her and she steps inside, and is very pleasantly surprised. He has clearly cooked a curry, as he said, because the delicious aroma of it fills the room, and his place is so neat and tidy... and stylish. "Come into the kitchen and we'll find you something to drink first" he says. He forages in the fridge and produces a bottle of her favourite bubbly, offering her some. "Thank you" she says and he proceeds to pour her an enormous glass before leading her through to the lounge room. He invites her to take a seat, so she chooses a comfy looking single-seat armchair and settles herself in just as his phone rings. He takes the call and briefly covers the mouthpiece to apologise to her, listening for a few minutes before adding that there is a problem at work, telling her it will probably take him 10-15 mins to sort it all out. "That’s ok," she says "I'll be fine". So he leaves the room to deal with the issue in private, and she looks around for something to occupy her while he is gone. She spies a book on the coffee table and picks it up. Within a few minutes she is squirming in her seat... the book is a series of short Dominant/submissive stories. And she literally cannot put it down, gulping her drink as she devours page after page of shockingly erotic scenarios. Watching her from the next room, the man walks back in and she looks up guiltily, so he quickly strides over to her, sitting down on the coffee table directly in front of her. "You get into that sort of thing do you?" he asks, plucking the book from her nervous fingers. Her face, already flushed, colours a deeper red in embarrassment, "No, I'm not into that" she says; and he smiles knowingly in response, "Oh, aren’t you? Or is it just that you haven’t discovered that aspect of yourself yet?" She looks at him with wide eyes. "I'll bet", he adds, "that at least one of your past lovers has commented on how well you take direction in the bedroom." Her breathing, already altered by reading the stories, becomes a little more unsteady as her nervousness increases. "Ummm... y-y-yes!" She stammers quietly in response, "how... how did you know that?" At that, he looks directly into her eyes, pinning her gaze, "And I am pretty sure," he continues "that right now, you are already so wet, that I could slide my cock inside of you and out again, and it would come out dripping with your juices..." She gasps in shock, and arousal, at the graphic bluntness of what he has just said, seeing that very image so clearly in her mind.
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| Comments to Story: Salty |
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| Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
| A deliciously tasty treat, served up with expert skill, as always. Incredibly well formed story with a sweet easy-going tone and a great introduction to a dom/sub encounter. Thanks, Angie. Great job.
__________________ Spice is the wonder and excitement in your world. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 7
| Thanks... its not Angie tho! This was my first attempt |
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| Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
| Sorry I got the name mixed up on your wonderful story. I confused the author name with the story below yours. Either way, your story, Salty was a delicious treat to read! You did a superb job on it. Again, my apologies. I hope to read more stories that you write soon. --------pepper
__________________ Spice is the wonder and excitement in your world. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 387
| I agree with Pepper, Willingly...this was a wonder story of introduction to Dom/sub...It was written masterfully and had very nice flow it. I look forward to the next addition to this story ...Thank you for sharing it.
__________________ Just because the road is rocky dosn't mean that your spirit should be rocky too. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 7
| Thanks Gypsy... appreciated |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Having read a lot of lit in this area I must say this was a refreshing beginning. It has a decided and controlled pace, the characters are sketched just enough to develop the plot, and it clearly is leading to another installment, though it could stand on its own too. So the writing and plot is clear and mature. The scenes around the "salty" theme are deliciously sexy and she is a naughty girl indeed!...and he is a lucky man! She sounds like the perfect understudy.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 7
| Thanks Dion... but surely she's not *that* naughty? Not yet anyway |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: AZ Posts: 13
| I lost my breath in anticipation as I went on to the next page... you are naughty, dirty even! Keep it up! |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Melbourne Australia Posts: 292
| Dear Willingly, I loved the story. It brought back some vivid memories for me of being with a lady for the first time. In real life I found that in many cases, the best way to break the ice with a lady, who you knew wanted you to fuck her, but was trying hard not to make it obvious, was to sit her down on the couch, and after a few introductory kisses start playing with her breasts. It wouldn't be long before you moved to the point of running your hand up her dress and to start stroking your way up to her pussy. It was only a matter of time before you were in or on the bed enjoying what each other had to offer. Your writing was so realistic and well done. Thanks again. |
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