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| “I.. I ..I.. just came from work. I kind of forgot this was a costume party.” I stammered. “You look, ah, great. Who are you tonight?” “I am me. I came her looking for you. Do I look like what you expected?” As she spoke, she reached out and took my hand into hers. Everything exploded and faded away all at once. We were spinning in a void, my body on fire. The world was spinning. The party had evaporated. Everything was out of focus. Except for this gothic queen. My eyes were locked onto hers. She drew me closer as we spun, her breath hot on my lips. She smelled of lavender. I could almost feel her lipstick as she spoke, “This is what you want. I am your dream. I watch you at night stroking your cock. See the ecstasy on your face. I am in your dreams. Holding your cock. Sucking your cock. I see the images in your mind. How you fuck me. How you grab me. How you eat my pussy. It is always shaved, just like you want. Wet. I see how you spread my legs and lick my ass. My lipstick smeared onto your face, your cock, your balls. I am me. I came here for you. Take me. Use me. Pleasure me. Cum for me. “ My cock was rock hard. I had the sensation that my cock was in her mouth, yet her mouth was so close to mine that my breath was hers. I was close to cumming. I started to panic. I could not stop what was happening. I did not want it to stop, but I did not know what was happening to me. I opened my mouth to say something, anything. Scream. How did she know my fantasies, my thoughts? Stop this. As my lips parted, her tongue passed my lips. It hooked behind my teeth and pulled my lips to hers. She kissed me, passionately. Aggressively. I don’t remember breathing, but that kiss was electric. I felt her breasts, her rock hard nipples press into me. Her pelvis compressed my cock. I was losing control. I wanted this woman in a way I had never known. My cock was pulsing into her. I could feel the heat of her sex against my leg. My heart was racing. I reached around to pull her to me. Our bodies fused. She was fucking me, yet we were fully clothed. I could feel her pussy around me cock. I could not hold out much longer. I was going to cum…. “Hey!” I looked around me. For a moment, I did not know where I was. I was standing at the bar in Brian’s house, at the Halloween party. “Hey, chief, I have been trying to get your attention. You look like you were in some kind of trance. You OK?” Brian was talking to me. I looked around. The party was going on, but no gothic queen. “Fine, fine.” I said, shaking my head. What the fuck just happened? I looked around quickly for her. “Hey Brian, did you see a woman, tall, dark black hair, gothic outfit? Where did she go?” “Man, I have not seen anyone like that. I would love to see her though. Is she hot?” The universal guy question. Shallow to many women, I know, but part of the guy dialogue. “She must have put a spell on you. You are white as a ghost. Nice costume, by the way. What are you, a generic overworked business guy?” “Yea, I guess. Just came from the office,” I responded, not really interested or even hearing what Brian was saying. “I was talking to this woman dressed up in a witchy, gothic getup. Never seen her before. She was right here, but I did not see her walk away. I need to find her. I’ll be back in a minute,” I said. I excused myself from Brian and walked through the party. I looked everywhere for her, but nothing. She was no where to be found.
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| Comments to Story: Cemetery Dream |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 4
| Wow that was really good and very original. Nicely written! |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 5
| So deliciously tantalizing! The story flows nicely and uses beautiful imagery. I loved it! |
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
| Well written and wonderfully imaginative from the darker side of things. I enjoyed this a great deal! |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 23
| Loved it! :hammer: Naut |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Clitterville Posts: 164
| So different, yet so tantilizing. I've got to say this is the first story of this nature I found myself wanting to finish. Thank you for the vividness and distraction!! (hehe guess I should TRY to get back to work).. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 344
| Wow. That was quite something. Hot and powerful, but also slightly saddening at the end. |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 0
| What a lovely story! The descriptions were ethereal, and concrete enough to keep the dedicated interest in the thread of the story line. Well done! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Wow! That was sensational!!! Very well thought out and told!! This is definitely on my top 5 or so in Hallow's Eve stories along with Lily's writings about a werewolf!! When you manage to get that fecund imagination of yours to story on paper, and I know it is a bigger struggle than many think/know, you can be a great writer b4.
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