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| Tossing and turning Tony just could not get comfortable. Groaning a final time he gave up, sat up in bed and stared around the dark room of his coach. The long nights out on the "circuit" were slowly catching up with him. It wasn't the job that was doing it, but the being alone was what was haunting him and his dreams most. He got out of bed and walked into the kitchen in just a pair of boxers, no shirt and ran his hand through his thick black hair, grabbed a glass out of the cupboard and got a drink of water. He went to the couch, grabbed up the remote and turned on the TV. He started flipping through channels seeing mostly infomercials and action movies. He sighed and turned the TV back off and simply sat in the darkness. Leaning his head back against the side of the couch his mind began to wander as he began to doze; the "dreamers" of the night began to take over. He found himself standing in a place he'd never been before. He looked around the area and recognized some people he knew and actually saw everyday out here on the road. His crew chief and fellow drivers but he just could not place the surroundings. He found himself being drawn towards a darkened aisle around a large building. Normally a cautious person when it came to going anywhere that was dark or even mildly so, he just couldn't stop himself and for that matter he didn't want to. He walked up to the side of the building, turned and saw that the scene had changed again. Everyone he knew was gone; he was now alone and surrounded by darkness. It wasn't cold and he did not feel alone. Reaching out, he searched for a wall or anything to walk himself against and as he moved forward. He found himself yet again in another place. Not one for guessing games even in his sleep induced trance, he was becoming agitated. He didn't know where he was and always having to "watch his back" wasn't putting him in any better of a mood as far as he was concerned. Just as he was going to try to draw himself out of the dream the scene changed yet again. This time he found himself in a bedroom or what he guessed to be one becauseof the huge four post wooden bed standing in the center of the room. The air was filled with a sweet perfume smell and was drawn to it. He reached the bed and saw that it had a deep burgundy coverlet on it. Pillows were stacked high against the headboard and candles were everywhere. Every shape and size of candle in every imaginable sequence was placed in holders and on stands all over the room, floor and walls. The feel of the room aroused him. He felt a presence behind him and stiffened as he spun around quickly in case whatever it was came to bring him harm. Instead, he was standing face to face with the most beautiful woman he'd ever seen. He started to speak but as quickly as she'd come, she disappeared. Blinking Tony sat up and looked around the coach. He was back on the couch but the image of the woman was etched into his brain now. He shook it off again blaming the "aloneness" of being on the road. Standing he went back to his room and climbed back into bed, bound and determined to get some sleep. He had qualifying the next day and didn't want to be completely useless to himself or the team. He had barely laid his head back onto his pillow when he once again found himself in the same room. The same woman stood over him but this time he was in the large bed in the center of the room.
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| Comments to Story: The Dream |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| Angel, this was wonderful. Made me feel like a voyeur, yet part of the story too. Your best by far.... Just read it again for the nuances, which you are soo good at! Of course the sex was described beautifully but the essence of a dream state was very powerful. I know we have all felt bound up in that "reality" ourselves. But, what I loved most was how you left the door open for Tony and his dream girl. Nothing has changed my mind. Still your best and will be my fave of yours without question. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Eastern Pennsylvania Posts: 98
| This was quite good, Angel. I generally am impatient with dream sequence sex and true to form I rushed through my first reading of this. I then read random paragraphs (not unlike the way I read erotica while in Jr. High) and enjoyed each one as it stood on its own before again reading it carefully from beginning to end. Kudo's my sweet. |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 0
| And here I thought you had your heart set on Jr... 8-) great story. If I hazard a guess, I would be willing to bet you have emerald eyes... Did I mention that I love green..? |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 342
| Beautiful. This is wonderfully written and incredibly sensual. Just the right details and enough heat to spit-roast a pig farm. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Clitterville Posts: 164
| *giggles* YUP to both...but hey a girl can "dream" no? ;-) ;-) |
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
| I have read this several times and it never seems to be enough. You have done a FABULOUS job here FFA. It is by far your best work! Love your mind! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Tennessee Posts: 588
| Wonderfull job FFA. Loved the dream sequence, the erotocism and the over all sexuality of dreams in general tend to get my "attention". |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Illinois Posts: 416
| Well FFA, you really hit the nail on the heaad this time. Great story, held my attention throughout. Thanks |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Very, very cleverly written.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Lonestar State Posts: 8
| I've read almost all of the stories you've posted and with the "personal" touch you have on the driver stories, I'm drawn deeply into them. Knowing the side of you that can bring them even more to life than they already are, but in ways that everyone can enjoy. Your others were quick, hot and heated, this one draws you out, makes you want to touch, but to stand back and watch. I love the flux in the ways you right, either suck em in tight, or leave them wanting more. Great story Angel luv, the Jr. one's are still my favorite, but this one...is awesome as well! |
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