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| <P align=center> <DIV align=center><FONT color=#3399ff><FONT face=@FangSong><B><I>This is something that i have never done before. Never envisioned beimg with a woman. But here she was in my bed touching me, leaving lipstick stains on my inner thighs.My cries, screams bring colorful light into the room as she presumes to lick me,suck me. Making my poetic juices flow like a river. Running her fingers through my natural she presses her soft body against mine. Kisses me. Mingling tongues with our flavor mixed, We taste sweet together, a flavor of unmatched proportions. Gripping her hips i deepen the kiss getting more intuned with the scene. She pushes me down on my back and i spread once more and let her tongue move through me. And she licks.....and licks....and licks...until finally my ocean meets the crest and coats her eager tongue. Exausted a little ashamed i pass out fast asleep. I wake up with the sun in my face the next morning. I look around and realize that i am alone. "It must've been a dream." I say. Shaking my head, I get up and go to the bathroom. When i cut on the light i stop at the door. With wide open eyes i stare straight at the the mirror. Its covered in pink lipstick kisses and a message written in the same shade underneath. It said ' I enjoyed tasting you'. Dazed I walk to the mirror and read it again and again. I look down and see a phone number written on my thighs in black ink. Still standing, stuck staring at the bathroom mirror, i rub my eyes and walk back to the bathroom door. I cut off the light. Making my way i pause, and look down at my thighs again. I look around the room and spot a note pad with a pen. I walk over to it and quickly jot down the phone number. Then i crawl back in bed and drift back off to sleep. Dreaming of her and her lipstick stains.</I></B></FONT></FONT></DIV>
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| Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,554
| I see much potential here as a writer. You have good descriptive talents and a sense of setting the mood. You need to enlarge this and write about what led to this encounter, perhaps even add in a second day. Increasing your plot will add to the interest of your readers and will fill this small piece out and make it into more of a story. Try to write at least 1000 to 1500 words to start. That should print as two or three pages, here. Good luck with your skills, because you have good ones. Just give us a bit more of what you already do well. I look forward to reading more from you.
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
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Happy writing!!
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