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| Michelle Does Dallas |
 27th Sep 2007 06:00
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| Michelle arrived at the hotel in Dallas two days ahead of her fiancé. This is where they were to be married. The wedding was not for three days, but the arrangements were complete. They planned to spend time together, check on the final details and welcome their families and guests as they arrived from various parts of the state. It was to be a huge, Texas style, wedding, paid for by her very wealthy, and proud, father-in-law to be. There would be over four hundred people at the reception which was being held on a ranch just outside the city. It was early morning and she was famished. Getting her bags to the suite proved to be an easy task, it was a five star hotel, and the accommodations were excellent. There were three restaurants to choose from, each specializing in different fare, but she chose the one serving standard American food for a sit down breakfast. It was very early with only one older couple eating and a very good looking young single man, about her age, just ordering as they seated her. As it turned out she was only a few feet away from him. Shortly after they ordered, they struck up a conversation, mainly about the beautiful spring weather he had heard was expected to continue, and Dallas in general. Something about him, beyond his dark and sexy good looks, was enormously appealing to her. His voice was deep and smooth and he was obviously very well educated, but she could not quite pinpoint the rationale, for his exceptional appeal to her. She was enjoying the talk and, somehow, found herself believing everything he said, without question. No doubt he was a very charismatic man. She had never met anyone before who had that effect on her. She gave him a little information about herself, but for some reason did not mention her upcoming marriage. They continued to talk for awhile over coffee when he rose indicating he had an appointment and could not be late. She was a bit disappointed, enjoying his presence more than she should have, but showed none of it. Before leaving he invited her to dinner, since they were both alone. She knew she shouldn't, after all, she was here to be married. The attraction she felt, alone, was reason to decline, but found herself accepting without thinking. In her room and more in control, she decided she would call the restaurant and leave a message of apology, sorry that she could not join him. That morning she busied herself with confirming a few last minute appointments, checked with her hairdresser, and made an appointment for the spa for the early afternoon. Later, as she grabbed a snack from the well stocked refrigerator, she noticed two bottles of her favorite champagne chilled and ready. She made a mental note to pop the cork on one when she returned, then finished her snack and left for the spa. The spa was fantastic. She even had a relaxing massage, leaving her feeling totally at ease, though a touch drowsy, as always. The down side was, she was not able to shake her thoughts of her morning encounter, but, she thought, at least it made her feel warm and a bit amorous. Returning to the room, she headed for the champagne. Quickly uncorking it, she ignored the smaller glasses and filled a large water glass, downing a good portion quickly, then refilling it to the top. Curious, she moved to the sliding door leading to her second floor balcony, pulling aside a curtain panel to peak out. Looking down, she found her suite overlooked the tennis courts and, as she glanced around, noticed the man from breakfast playing tennis with another nice looking man. Her plans were to sit outside for awhile, but instead decided to draw a chair up and watch him from behind the curtains. Fascinated, Michelle watched the two of them play, only occasionally taking her eyes off the man from breakfast. His legs were firm and muscular and he moved athletically on the court with ease. His arms were muscled and his body toned perfectly. Again, the sensual feelings surfaced, her senses heightened at the sight of him. [b]
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28th Sep 2007
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| Administrator  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
|  Re: Michelle Does Dallas Very HOT story Cocoa! I can see something like that happening. I loved the details... oh how I loved the details. Fantastic ending... left me wondering! Thanks for the good work! |
 
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28th Sep 2007
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Tennessee Posts: 588
| Re: Michelle Does Dallas Excellent story Cocoa. I really enjoyed the feeling that I was in the room watching all of these events. Would love to see more stories from an inspired mind like yours. |
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3rd Oct 2007
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Re: Michelle Does Dallas I really enjoyed this story. And, I loved the ending, how to explain that, huh?? And, I felt like I was in the room. Love the way you pull the reader in....and damn HOT!!! |
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4th Jan 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: Michelle Does Dallas Very complex evening for one bride to be. This was very hot. |
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15th Jul 2008
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 1
|  Re: Michelle Does Dallas That was an awesome story - I loved that u added more than the original two guys - what a surprise... Again, great story. |
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