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| The Darkness |
 14th Jul 2008 18:51
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| The building was a low, windowless concrete structure in a dingy industrial area of the city. The front entrance was a steel clad door, painted black with no markings other than the suite number. To the left of the main entrance a ramp descended to an overhead door to allow vehicular access. A keypad was mounted low to the left side of the driveway and a security camera stared unblinkingly toward any vehicle seeking entry. Samantha’s car pulled onto the ramp and Keith punched in the access code; after a few seconds the overhead door ascended to allow entry. Inside the garage was parking space for perhaps 30 cars and an exit ramp at the far end. To the right was an elevated landing with a door leading into the main building. The parking garage was clean and well lit but still retaining an industrial flavor. The landing, door, and short stairway leading to them were all monitored by another security camera. A simple electric buzzer operated by a pushbutton was used to gain entry. Samantha and Keith stepped up to the door and pressed the button. After a brief delay, a buzzer sounded, Keith opened the door and they entered the building. Beyond the door a narrow hall extended to the right. The floor was thickly carpeted and the walls and ceiling were covered with sound absorbing material. At the end of the hall was another door, which led into a dressing room. Along one wall was a row of wardrobe cabinets. Several were closed and locked; the others were open. Each had a key attached to an elastic band that could be secured to a wrist or ankle. Inside each cabinet was a shelf, closet bar with several hangars, and a clothing hook attached to the inside of the door. In front of the row of cabinets was a padded bench upholstered in a suede-like cloth, simple and utilitarian. The dressing room was also equipped with showers, toilets, and a vanity with several sinks and full mirrors. The carpet was a simple short-loop pile to facilitate easy maintenance and the unused walls and ceiling were covered in the same sound absorbing material as the hall leading into the room. Finally, there was a thickly padded door at the far end of the dressing room. A muffled rhythm could be heard on the far side but the room was otherwise eerily silent. After disrobing and securing their keys, Samantha and Keith opened the padded door to find a narrow chamber with another identical door on the other side. The driving beat of the music was louder, but still distinctly muffled. When the first door was firmly closed the lights went out and the other door opened automatically. The primal rhythm was almost overwhelming and the darkness was profound. The only light was the faint red glow of the “EXIT” signs above the door through which they had just passed and another a few feet away along the same wall. Overwhelmed by the primitive rhythm of the music and the lack of visibility, Samantha and Keith paused for a few minutes to collect their bearings. The air was heavy with the scent of various fragrances and the pungent odor of fresh sweat and sexual secretions.
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15th Jul 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
|  Re: The Darkness Wow! That was an amazing story. So finely detailed, so free of inhibition....Wow!!! Great job!
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2nd Apr 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: London - ish Posts: 342
| Re: The Darkness I can't believe I've only just discovered this story!!! Its FANTASTIC!! This is exactly my kind of story... I love these anonymous, mass, all in there together, anything goes orgy scenarios. And they are SOOO hard to write. well, they are hard to write this well, that's for sure. I've got drafts of about half a dozen attempts at this kind of story, none of which have ever been good enough to publish... because they were just not as good as this. The action is clear, the energy is sustained, the timing and the flow of the story is just excellent and all the images are so damn clear you could just about fuck them yourself. Absolutely brilliant work Wolf... my hat is well and truly off! An orgy as they should be written. Just keep it coming.
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2nd Apr 2009
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| Chat Moderators  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Re: The Darkness I don't know how I missed this one either .......Wow Wolfy !!! Well I can't say this is really my scene , but you did an amazing job wolf I totally agree with greedy ... *hugs*
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