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| I looked up at her as she stared back at me. She said. "I have wanted you since I saw you this evening, Kay." I looked at her with wide eyes, how had she known my name? But just as she knew mine, I knew hers. Her name was Lily. It was a beautiful, sexy name to go with a beautiful, sexy woman. My heart was pounding in my chest so loud I swear she must have heard it. I licked my lips and said, "If only you could have been inside my head then." She grinned back at me, "I was," she said. I blushed even harder but kept my eyes on her. "Then you know how badly I want you too", I replied. She nodded, beginning to climb onto my bed. We stopped speaking then. She could see into my mind and see what I wanted and what I wanted to do to her. I wrapped my hand in her hair, pulled her to me and kissed her deeply. She kissed me back, and I could feel her fangs begin to lengthen. She was breathing hard, as was I. She pulled back from the kiss to watch my reaction to her fangs. I watched in fascination and felt my pussy throb. She was so damn sexy and I wanted to be bitten by her. I wanted to be one of her kind. But most of all, I wanted her. I wanted to touch her and kiss her. To run my hands all over her body and touch her most sensitive places. I wanted to kiss every part of her body. I wanted to make love to her and to fuck her too. I wanted her to do the same to me. Leaning up, I kissed her again. Our tongues tangled, exploring one another's mouths, feasting on each other. Then I felt one of her fangs pierce my lip, the drop of blood running down the side of my mouth. She stopped kissing me, pulling back. Her nostrils flared at the scent of my blood. Her eyes glittered with lust and bloodlust. I reached up and wiped the drop away, carrying my finger to her mouth. She backed away slightly but I just looked at her steadily. "Take it......please. Take more, make me one of you," I begged her. She looked deep into my eyes, making sure that I knew what I wanted. If she bit me, there would be no going back. There would be no being human again. Those thoughts were terrifying but that is truly what I wanted in my heart of hearts. I had seen her for just a brief time but knew that I wanted to be hers as soon as I saw her. I looked at her and said, "Yes, I am sure this is what I want. I want to be one of you for eternity. I want to be with you for always. You are my destiny." I smiled as I came to the end of my speech, and arched my neck to her. My heart was pounding. I wanted this and her so very badly. I knew in my bones that this was how it was supposed to be. She kissed me once more, then, she sunk her teeth into my neck. I moaned loudly, my heart racing, my blood burning in my veins. I grabbed her shoulders for support and pressed harder to her mouth. She drank my blood greedily, moaning as she pulled her mouth away.
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| Comments to Story: Bitten |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Illinois Posts: 416
| Wow Kitty, that was hot. I almost want to play too and be in the middle..yea bite me. You did a great job, and I loved the easy of the read and of course the details. Thank you for this Night |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Tennessee Posts: 588
| Wow kitty. I am impressed. Hot story. I think a little more than just your vampire fantasy was filled in this story. I would love to see more from you. |
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
| Kissing your soft lips then trailing down your cheek to your delicious neck. I lick the sweetness from your flesh and sink my teeth in lovingly and drink what you offer. Oh my God! HOT story girl! When can we begin? Take me! |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: glasgow,scotland Posts: 52
| kitty.....you are a wonder....a really fantastic story sweetie....had me throwing out my wooden stakes and garlic,and opening up my windows wide,hoping for a visit,he he.....really well written,must have more of the same :-D |
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| Chat Moderators Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Oh My Kitty
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Kitty, I have to say that of all your stories, save perhaps your lightening storm one, this is as hot as anything I have read by you. The story line connecting blood and lust, the subtle twists like "making her groan and speak in different languages" added to the sheer drama of the eroticism of your tale. Yes, we all adore Lily sweet lady, but does she make you so hot that you'd be willing to become a vampire to have her???? Hey, what am I talking about?? Of course she would!!! I honestly loved this and think it is very nearly your best piece of writing yet. It was delicious.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 9
| ah, i found what i was looking for just tell me... did you write this before you read twilight? because i like the thing with the fangs a lot more than normal teeth... lol your story is great, one of my favorites
__________________ And yet, to say the truth, reason and love keep little company together nowadays. - A Midsummer Night's Dream |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: the shadows Posts: 390
| Sensual.....Seduction.....Passionate.....Lustful piece. Simply amazing. A very well written piece full of imagery. I could see you two becoming one.....Great Job. I can't believe I never read it before. Definately, glad I have now...Thank you
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| Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
| I loved the intensity and passion of your story. The power and almost-desperation of your vampire lovers added to the blazing mood of your words. Very well written and enjoyable!
__________________ Spice is the wonder and excitement in your world. |
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