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Old 29th Oct 2007 08:00
jillbaby
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Within minutes, a silver car pulled up as arranged. When the rear door swung open, I stepped forward to look inside. The courtesy light didn't come on, and I could scarcely make out who was in the car. "Are you Sharon?" A man in a man wearing a party mask asked, as he leant out of the door. I said yes, and had just given my password when a hand reached out and dragged me in before I could react.

In seconds, I was gagged and something was pulled over my eyes.

There was someone on each side of me holding my arms and I was helpless.

Then my arms were bound above my head to the head restraint, by some soft material. I made no attempt to resist. This was certainly a strange introduction. I wondered if my fantasies were about to be realised and if I would I enjoy them.

I was being treated firmly but gently. My heart was pounding. I didn't know whether I was afraid or excited. No one spoke as the car travelled on through the dark streets.

I could smell a woman's perfume on one side, as hands gently brushed my hair back into place, and stroked my neck soothingly.

Then to my surprise, someone eased my skirt up to my waist, leaving my thong exposed. My top was pushed up and from the softness of the hands which started caressing my breasts, they were a woman's. My nipples rose at once to the knowing way she stroked them. As the threat of any violence disappeared, my body responded to the sexual stimulation, and I started to relax.

But then the firmer hands of a man roamed over my stomach, and pushed down under my thong, a finger probing searchingly over my pussy lips.

As my fear totally evaporated, and changed to arousal, I automatically eased my thighs a little wider apart. Then, as if encouraged by my movement, he put his arms under my legs and eased me forward. As my buttocks slid to the edge of the seat, my bent legs were pinned against the seat in front of me.

Hands stroked teasingly around the tops of my leggings. My thong had ridden up uncomfortably between my pussy lips, and it was a relief as it was peeled away, and pulled up my pinned legs.

My juices were now flowing, and I waited for the moisture to be discovered.

Instead of sticking his finger into me, as I expected, he teasingly ran a finger up and down my inner lips and paused at my pussy entrance, which was drawn open by my position.

Then came the first words. "She is nice and wet already - she could be a real hottie."

As he probed gently, I was glad that I was lubricated, and his finger slipped in smoothly to the knuckle.

My legs jerked with the impact of the thrill that ran through me, and my clit responded immediately when his hand brushed it.

At the same time, soft wet lips closed round one of my nipples and nuzzled gently.

Just then the car stopped and the driver spoke. "OK you two, we're here. Let's get a move on." The man muttered his disappointment, and withdrew his finger, and the mouth left my aroused nipple.

Just as I was starting to enjoy it, I thought, as I was eased back onto the seat and my clothing rearranged. My hands were moved from the car seat, and tied behind my back.

I was led out, and up some stairs. I heard a door opening, we seemed to enter, and it slammed behind us.

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Old 29th Oct 2007   #1
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Hummm an interesting take on halloween. I think it was just the right blend of elements of need and desire, and a little darkness that hides in all of us.

Thank you
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Old 29th Oct 2007   #2
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When you first arrived at the Mindspired doorstep, with "Me and the Gardener", it was immediately apparent that a major talent in erotic prose had joined our little posse of writers. With each piece you submit that initial appraisal is rewarded. This well crafted, erotically over-the-top fantasy gushes with anticipatory excitement and titillation every bit as much as Sharon herself. Maximum Licks!
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Old 29th Oct 2007   #3
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Default Re: Halloween Gang-bang Initiation

That was pretty hot! I liked the detail, and the blending of the holiday with the darker desires we all seem to hide. (Night said it best!)

Keep writing!
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Old 30th Oct 2007   #4
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Very well done ....
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Old 30th Oct 2007   #5
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Default Re: Halloween Gang-bang Initiation

Thank you all for the compliments.

I really appreciate you taking the time to send those messages.

It is so encouraging to beginners like me.

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Old 13th Nov 2007   #6
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Well Jillbaby... you have done an excellent job with this story. I must say I truly enjoyed the story and the writing style.

I cant wait to find more time to read some of your other works.
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Old 22nd Nov 2007   #7
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Awesome! !!

Hey Jillbaby you must have a real horny imagination... Inspired!! had me reaching for the kleenex....

Are you a professional writer? If not then you fucking well ought to be!

Looking forward to enjoying some more of your work.. Keep it up!! :-P
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This was an off-beat piece I really enjoyed. I am not sure if this is the whole story or if there is a sequel..? But Rotsen really hit the nail on the head. You are a remarkably gifted writer Jillbaby!
The central character-narrator seemed so beautiful from the reactions of others in the story but also has the adventurous and vulnerable qualities that can make her a real dream.
BTW, do you happen to know her email? lol Your women are so hot Jill!! Lawdy!!!
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Old 3rd May 2008   #9
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greaat story jill, owndering if there will be follow ups for each holiday
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I agree with Nightwatcher.
Nightwatcher said:
Hummm an interesting take on halloween. I think it was just the right blend of elements of need and desire, and a little darkness that hides in all of us.

Thank you

SlowHand:
Jillbaby this was indeed a well constructed tale. It covers many complexities of scenes which you handled admirably. I definitely savored each new setting your main character traveled though. I admire the way you revealed your main character’s feelings and emotions and showed her mental sexual growth through the intensity of her sexual encounters leading her into a new creature sexually.

Very artistically done Jillbaby
Thanks for writing this.
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