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Old 2nd Oct 2007 16:10
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He looks up at me and slowly stands to take my mouth. Our tongues play happily as the spider inches forward. My eyes are wide and glued to the spiders movements. He tastes so good with my juices all over him. I feast hungrily, nipping at his lips. I want to scream out but I am captured in the very moment, unable to warm him of the approaching danger. He lifts me once again and just as he plunges his cock inside me, the spider's fangs sink into his neck. He pushes forward, not aware of what has happened. The spider quickly drains the blood from his body. He withers before my eyes. I can feel him shrinking inside me.

When his body falls to the ground, I find my voice and scream louder than ever before, waking myself. I try to sit up but I am pinned to the bed. I flail around frantically until I realize it is my man who has me pinned. He screams out in orgasm and takes his mouth to my neck.

My heart is beating so fast, my mind is blurred from the nightmare and I'm not even sure if I was enjoying this world. He kisses my lips, falls off to the side, pulling me with him. He holds me close until my heart stops stomping in my chest. I manage to fall back asleep for another hour or two and sleep without dreaming.

I stretch, letting the new day take over. I open my eyes cautiously to the sun that is shining through the window. I still feel a little drowsy from the lack of good sleep. He rolls over and mutters something about our trip then heads off to the bathroom. Yes, our trip!! I had almost forgotten about it. A long weekend with our friends is just what the doctor ordered!

I jump out of bed and anxiously prepare for our departure. I make us a quick breakfast then wash the few dishes that we dirtied. He packs the car with the bags I prepared the night before and I grab the cooler full of sandwiches and drinks. We took the car yesterday and had it checked out and gassed it up, so we are set.

The air is so refreshing. I roll down the window just enough so I don't get chilled. I love the air this time of the year. It smells, clean. I lay back and enjoy the scenery. The bright colors of fall reflect off the passing river.

The car starts to spit and sputter. He manages to keep it running until we reach the top of a hill then it dies. We coast down and pull off the side of the road. He tries to start it a couple of times then gets out to look under the hood. My man is not mechanically inclined so I find this action just a little funny. He comes back and tells me we are going to have to walk to the town which is only a couple of miles away. Of course, he knows a short cut. He did grow up around here so I have all the faith in the world he will get us where we need to be.

We walk, hand in hand though the fallen leaves. The breeze is so crisp and filled with autumn smells. The light woodsy aroma fills the air. Before I know it, we are right in the middle of the woods. I take a deep breath and close my eyes for one instant just to enjoy the day and keep all the scary thoughts away. I open them and look up just in time to come face to face with the most intricate spider web hanging across the path. I stop abruptly and stand looking, searching. The web is designed in the most unusual fashion and so beautiful that I can hardly take my eyes from it. My mind reels when I realize that by the size of it, its creator has to be scary movie - large. As if by telepathy, the huge spider comes down its web from high above. As it descends, its size becomes increasingly large. I can see each hair on its legs as it quickly closes the distance. I have never seen anything so repulsive in all of my life. Its fangs are at least 12" long and dripping of a milky substance.

I scream and quickly run off, boyfriend in tow. After what seems an eternity we stop to catch our breath. I look around making sure the creature thing didn't follow us. I lean back, resting all of my body weight on a tall tree. I keep alert making sure I am ready to run at the first site of the scary spider.

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Old 2nd Oct 2007   #1
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Well that sounds like one hell of a looping nightmare.
With the combination of touch and go horror and eroticism.... I have to give this story a clean 8.5 on my turned on yet scared stiff - meter.
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Old 3rd Oct 2007   #2
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Lovely nightmare, Lily!

Your attention to details is pure adrenaline for my blood! In all ways! *smile*

I enjoyed it a lot and... I will seriously consider taking some mechanical lessons soon. *smile* [No, not those type. The other].

Thank you for these dark thoughts - so full of [yellow] color presented!
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Old 3rd Oct 2007   #3
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Loved this story, Lily. Just the right mix of terror and lust and eroticism. Gosh, waht a lovely nightmare to have, yet terrifying at the same time.

Maybe I can scrounge up a spider costume somewhere..... ;-)
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Old 3rd Oct 2007   #4
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Ok, now this was a real Halloween story. Erotic, scary at the same time. The detail was wonderful, (lordy I wish I could get that much in my writing) and I loved the ending. Thank you so much for this wonderous, just haunting tale.
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Old 29th Oct 2007   #5
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Congrats on a fascinating and original plot. Beautifully written as ever.
That is definitely a classic in the horror genre, but perhaps not one to turn on the females :-D

Perhaps it should carry a "health warning " for arachnophobes ? :lol:

I will definitely dust off that web in the corner.
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It is a long known link between terror and the erotic you roo this in Lily. The movements "in an out" of one state into the other, yet making one story line anyway, brings the connection to life. Just masterful.
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Wow... this story is really different. I loved it. It's kind of chilling, but also realyl hot too... like something that's constantly pushing you away and then pulling you back in. Excellently creative and wonderfully written. Very impressed.
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