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The Mistake
Old 2nd Mar 2007 08:30
msounds
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Category: Horror Erotica
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Finally, it is Friday. It so happens it is also Friday the 13th but this small detail does not concern me at all. I do not believe in the horoscope or any of the supernatural and scary events you hear along through stories and movies. I have always been a man that believed that there has to be a logical explanation and the rest is nothing but a skewed projection of one's mind. There have been other Friday 13th days before and, despite the fact that, granted. some misfortunes did take place, I never looked at that day with anything else but a compassionate smile. Well, today was just another one of those - or so it started.

I just got out of the shower and water drops can still be spotted on my warm body. I am checking again the time - 06:31. The time you usually wake up and read my morning thoughts which I send to you through the email, late in the night, every single night except the weekends. I smile and think of you - there - just waking up and opening your computer for a couple of minutes - only to read my email before going to work.

Most of these morning thoughts are sensual and passionate - with detailed description on the sexual side and scenarios I think of happening when we meet. I am always hard when writing them and, if not all, somewhere around 98.2% of these emails make you wet, very wet. And it doesn't stop here - we chat and talk during the day while you are at work and my growls [low and often for various reasons] are making your fluids rush through your body. Yes, more wetness. I believe your laundry schedule has changed since a couple of months ago and I am guilty of not being environmental friendly at all - at least not when it comes to the number of washing cycles needed to clean your panties. Sometimes your pants, too. Daily. And I can only hope no one noticed that you drink more water these days. *smile*

The shower took a bit longer this morning - I fully shaved my genital area - thinking about your hungry mouth and how much you will enjoy my smooth skin. I already know how big of a craving you have for oral and your desire to taste me, and I want to feel you unleash everything you have on me. Everything. Well, I had no idea what I was going to unleash from deep inside you - just a few hours later.

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I arrive at the airport without any incidents - you are still one hour and a half away, in a small town, probably working as usual and wondering why am I not online. I haven't told you I am coming as I enjoy surprising and seeing your eyes when realizing we are finally face to face. You very well know I am into doing that kind of surprises and you don't mind - the sooner the better for us both.


The rental is ready and soon I am on my way to you. Less than an hour and half until I see you and less than an hour and a half until our eyes will have met. The thoughts I have cannot be controlled easily - but they all fly into the same direction - you, us. I can only imagine how it will be to see you for the first time, to meet you, to touch the skin I have craved to touch for so many months - and to respond to your touches, your sounds, your words - with so many more of mine.

The traffic goes by and I almost miss the exit - I see you everywhere and even the road signs seem to guide me towards you - there are no miles written to the small town destination - I only see 'minutes until we meet'. There is no paved road and I am not driving a car anymore - it is a grass path and I am floating - to you - and I am sure that if someone would look from outside would only see a large, large smile on my face - and they would probably think I am on drugs from the look on my eyes - on drugs or, well, in love. Strangely enough, I don't do drugs.
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Old 10th Mar 2007   #1
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wowser, not into horror etc as such, nice work though, very nice.
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Old 20th Mar 2007   #2
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Mmmm.. violent and tender all in one. Tasting your blood and impaling you. Fantasy of yours? It's nice to see you give in... and enjoy fully.

And hmmm - something greater than you can handle?
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Old 18th Aug 2007   #3
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Never read a story in this catagory before. Not normally something that catches my attention, however you caught it, kept it. And I did enjoy it. Thanks for sharing!! Clitters & Kisses....
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Holy cow! That was such an amazing story! Each sentence, every word makes the reader feel the need, the urgency of the passion in the man. Your phrasing propels the reader onward, reaching, grasping out at the completion we know we must experience with your characters. Your descriptions are detailed and unique. Your vivid imagery captures the imagination of the reader and takes the reader to an unknown, far-away realm. Your climax truly is--taking out the gasping emotions of the reader along with the heart--only to release the realizations, and put us back within the minds and bodies of your characters as they live on together. This was a fantastic read!
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Old 12th Sep 2009   #5
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That was Awesome !!!!!! Intense,Extremely passionate.It as if the words that you wrote take the reader by the hand ,leads them on a amazing journary. They feel what the characters feel the hunger,the desire, the passion, the pain. Great job !!!!!

I look forward to read more of your stories
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