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| The time flies and I am turning into the road which leads to your workplace. I know you are alone today and my pulse is at a constant high. My heart races as I spot your white car in the parking lot - the only car - and I manage to somehow not trip over when leaving mine and entering the building. I have a business alibi to be there - well, enough to explain my presence just in case someone else shows up or is present already. I open the door and enter the visitors’ area. I see you in the next room, through the glass - and you see me. Our eyes met for a fraction of a second and you know. You were in the middle of something - you manage to put those papers down and come to open the door that is left between us. You make a few steps - I make a few as well - and here we are, standing an arm's length from each other. We don't blink - the eyes are locked - and I can hear your breathing - heavy. I am not even sure if I breathe anymore - all I can feel is a very, very powerful vibration that covers all my frequencies - and I am instantly transported from this world - to ours. We finally meet and our journey is now on a different level. I take your hands into mine - you still cannot move or say anything and I sense a vague trembling in your hands. They are warm and I warm them up a bit more, with my own. I put your both hands into one of mine and, with the other, I reach out and touch your face, your cheek - barely touch you and let the fingers feel your skin, there, for the first time. I see that you suddenly inhale a larger quantity of air and your chest is raising a bit higher. The eyes are talking and we flood each other with feelings and desires. We both know what is about to happen and we both have anticipated this moment with great, great emotions. I look at you and can only imagine what you feel - how you feel - I know I am racing inside and boiling - the blood enlarging my veins and crying to touch you, to feel you - everywhere. I feel your scent and inhale it - it's nothing like I've ever felt - and I can feel you are wet - very wet - and I inhale that deeper. Your eyes are saying it, your temperature is screaming it out - it feels like you are going to explode in a few moments if we will continue like this; I take your face in my hands - and lean towards you. Your eyes are closing and your mouth lips, slowly, open. I touch your mouth with mine and your lips send electric jolts into my body. I melt - and I know I have stepped into Heaven. Your lips are warm, soft, and open to mine - to take. To feel - to taste - to wrap around my tongue and to kiss the one mouth you have craved and needed to kiss - all these months. We jump together and we soon are deep into our world - hands freely feeling each other and our mouths lost in our first kiss - a long, long sexual kiss that takes us a few floors high and then, opens - wider. The tongues are playing, unlocked and enjoying the taste, the skin, the muscles. Touching each other around, massaging, swirling in our mouths with a passion we have built inside and is now flooding us. More tongue, more lips - warmer, softer, moans and hands - they all join in to throw us even higher in our world. I think I feel your teeth a bit different, sharper - but I pay no attention to that. We both moan louder and I growl, I growl and kiss you with all of myself. I slow down and realize we are not in the safest place possible - if we continue like this we might end up storming the place - not that I mind, but it's your workplace and you will have to come back to work on Monday. Difficult to slow down and stop our kiss, we manage to - somehow - and arrange to meet later in the evening. I will have some time meanwhile to get a room and have some rest then I will come to pick you up.
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| Comments to Story: The Mistake |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 411
| wowser, not into horror etc as such, nice work though, very nice. |
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
| Mmmm.. violent and tender all in one. Tasting your blood and impaling you. Fantasy of yours? It's nice to see you give in... and enjoy fully. And hmmm - something greater than you can handle? |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Clitterville Posts: 164
| Never read a story in this catagory before. Not normally something that catches my attention, however you caught it, kept it. And I did enjoy it. Thanks for sharing!! Clitters & Kisses.... |
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| Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
| Holy cow! That was such an amazing story! Each sentence, every word makes the reader feel the need, the urgency of the passion in the man. Your phrasing propels the reader onward, reaching, grasping out at the completion we know we must experience with your characters. Your descriptions are detailed and unique. Your vivid imagery captures the imagination of the reader and takes the reader to an unknown, far-away realm. Your climax truly is--taking out the gasping emotions of the reader along with the heart--only to release the realizations, and put us back within the minds and bodies of your characters as they live on together. This was a fantastic read!
__________________ Spice is the wonder and excitement in your world. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 387
| That was Awesome !!!!!! Intense,Extremely passionate.It as if the words that you wrote take the reader by the hand ,leads them on a amazing journary. They feel what the characters feel the hunger,the desire, the passion, the pain. Great job !!!!! I look forward to read more of your stories
__________________ Just because the road is rocky dosn't mean that your spirit should be rocky too. |
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