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| I was not sure what we would do when you came into town next week. I sat down and thought about it for awhile but came up short, until last night that is. I had said goodnight to you and made my rounds in the house, turning off lights, the coffee pot and closing all the drapes. I climbed into my bed and drifted away with thoughts of you still in my mind. You sent me a message to let me know your flight would be in around 2pm. wanting to impress you even from the beginning, I chose to drive my show car. I arrived at the airport at 1:30 in my 1967 Shelby Mustang GT 500 convertible. I had even stopped at the car wash to get the dust off of her neon blue paint job. I waited patiently for you to step through those doors, but once you did I found I was not prepared. Even after the pictures and the personal description. You walked out of the airport and I knew it was you instantly. I was spellbound by your beauty, 5'6", auburn hair and a fantastic frame. Your navy blue sundress played gleefully in the wind. Its single strap wrapped over your shoulders and around the back of your neck. Its skirt covered just enough to be almost modest, your thighs in plain view. Your long tanned legs taunt and well muscled. Your sandals moved amongst the rush of sneakers and dress shoes. You made your way over to where I stood next to my car. I could not seem to speak, you took my breath away. Looking into your hazel eyes and seeing those full luscious lips, I found myself awe struck. You looked into my eyes and began to flush at the thoughts you read there. My first instinct was to take you into my arms and never let go. I opened the car door for you, not a single word passed between us until I got into the car. "So this is the car that you take to the auto shows?" you asked. Your fingers caressed the dash, the seats and then the side of the steering wheel. I watched each action thinking of those fingers touching me. Your hand came to rest on the back of mine. I could smell the faint scent of lilac coming from you. "Yes, I take this car to the car shows. I decided to bring it here for you to see and for the beginning of our first day together." I started the car and we drove away from the airport. I let you know that I had no plans of driving down the interstate to get back to my home town. We had an hours drive to get there and I didn't plan on wasting it by getting highway hypnosis.
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| Comments to Story: Our First Scenic Drive |
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| Chat Moderators Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Wonderful job Seker.....It's was more then I had expected and very much worth the wait....And while I might be a little on the prejudice side this one is my favorite ......so far anyway....... thanks for making my day ;-) |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Illinois Posts: 416
| OK, now that was worth a second read, which I did. You did a great job seker, seems you hit all the right spots at the right time and the story line was great... Thanks |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Awesome story, seker! Great detail, and the sex was hot! Great read!! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Tennessee Posts: 588
| Thank you all for your kind comments. I am really glad you enjoyed my little tale. I hope you all have these types of dreams to give you perspective on those wonderful things you desire. I will continue to write when I have the time and most of my stories are really my deepest fantasies. I am glad that I have met such a wonderful group of people and I can never thank you enough for the things you have done for me. |
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| Administrator Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Right where I belong.. fo Posts: 1,002
| Geez, after all the praise I gave you in private... I didn't realize I hadn't voiced in public! I love the emotion you show in this story. Clearly it is something from the heart. And... you know how I love details... great job! |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Wow, seker, this was beautiful! Romantic and hot all rolled together. I like these kinds of "dreamy" stories the most. I like you easy style in this one. It just sorta "worked" with the content like a charm. Great job! P. S. Wanna borrow my 98 clunker for the next time? We got lots of 'em up here where I live.
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