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Our First Scenic Drive (Page 2)
Old 12th Nov 2007 14:00
seker
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With the top down and the warm breeze blowing through our hair, we drove. The mountains were a beautiful backdrop to our scenic drive. The spring sun shined down on us as we talked and took in the sight of the valleys of trees. I stopped just outside of Knoxville so we could get a bite to eat. I found this little mom and pops pizza parlor and we went inside.

As we ate and talked I could not help but notice you watching me. It was not like you were making eye contact because we were talking. It was more like you were drinking me in with your eyes. I could feel my body reacting to the weight of your stare. A pulse passed through my groin. Craving your touch was becoming almost unbearable.

I looked over at the clock on the wall only to realize we had been here for hours. There was so much more I wanted to show you, so I paid for our meal and we got back into the car. You smiled at me and leaned in to kiss me. Your lips were as soft as silk and fueled with fire. I could not help but reach for you. One hand ran through your hair, the other cupped your cheek. Your skin was as smooth as glass yet as soft as the most comfortable pillow.

I could feel the change in the atmosphere, your breath leaving your body in a sigh. Your fingers touched my face as this romantic kiss continued. My passion burned deep within me, burning hotter still where ever your finger tips touched. I never would have guessed that your touch could burn me and yet soothe me at the same time. As our lips parted I knew that I had to have you. My body would explode with sexual tension if I did not.

I looked into your eyes, "Wow, that was amazing". Your shy smile told me you felt it too. I looked skyward to see that a few clouds were coming in and beginning to cover the evening stars. The full moon shinning down upon us was being obscured by the cloud cover. I started the car and headed for our final scenic stop.

As we got near I pointed to a large rock wall and told you that was where we were going. You looked at me like I was crazy. I asked you to close your eyes. You could feel the car moving toward the wall but did not open your eyes until I told you to. When you opened them you could see the layers in the wall. The brown and red stone that made up the wall was visible only in my headlights. I pointed past you to the other side of the car.

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Old 12th Nov 2007   #1
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Wonderful job Seker.....It's was more then I had expected and very much worth the wait....And while I might be a little on the prejudice side this one is my favorite ......so far anyway....... thanks for making my day ;-)
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Old 12th Nov 2007   #2
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OK, now that was worth a second read, which I did. You did a great job seker, seems you hit all the right spots at the right time and the story line was great...

Thanks
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Old 13th Nov 2007   #3
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Awesome story, seker! Great detail, and the sex was hot! Great read!!
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Old 14th Nov 2007   #4
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Thank you all for your kind comments. I am really glad you enjoyed my little tale.

I hope you all have these types of dreams to give you perspective on those wonderful things you desire. I will continue to write when I have the time and most of my stories are really my deepest fantasies.

I am glad that I have met such a wonderful group of people and I can never thank you enough for the things you have done for me.
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Old 14th Nov 2007   #5
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Geez, after all the praise I gave you in private... I didn't realize I hadn't voiced in public! I love the emotion you show in this story. Clearly it is something from the heart. And... you know how I love details... great job!
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Wow, seker, this was beautiful! Romantic and hot all rolled together. I like these kinds of "dreamy" stories the most.
I like you easy style in this one. It just sorta "worked" with the content like a charm. Great job!
P. S. Wanna borrow my 98 clunker for the next time? We got lots of 'em up here where I live.
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