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Our First Scenic Drive (Page 3)
Old 12th Nov 2007 13:00
seker
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"Oh my, its beautiful." There before you was a look out. You could see for miles, the valley below, the lights from the homes and the trees blowing in the wind. I turned the car toward the cliff and put the top back up. Inviting you to take a better look, I stepped out of the car and took a seat on the hood. You got out and sat beside me, taking my hand into yours, the warm winds of spring blowing your hair and that sweet smell of lilac in my direction.

I whispered into your ear, "This is a great view, but its beauty is paled in comparison to yours." You turned and looked into my eyes. I touched your face and leaned in to kiss you. As our lips met I could feel your need for me in your kiss. I let my hands rest behind your neck as I pulled you toward me. I could feel a light rain begin, but I did not care, I was lost in the moment.

I ran my hands along your soft neck, over your shoulders and down to your breasts. At my very touch the nipples began to harden under the thin sundress you were wearing. I could feel them pressing into my palms as I began to massage them, never releasing your lips. Your hands came up to meet mine, holding them to you and I knew that you did not want me to stop. I pulled free of the kiss and pulled the single strap over your head, releasing your beautiful breasts.

A light mist began to cover the valley as the rain grew a little in strength. As it went from sprinkling to a mild shower, I kneaded your now wet breasts and kissed you deeply. I slid off of the hood to stand before you. I felt your hands on my chest then I felt you pull and my shirt ripped at the force applied. Your finger nails dug into my chest; I squeezed your breasts a little firmer and began to nibble at your neck and earlobe.

My teeth grazed across your skin harder with each pass. I moved down your neck, over your shoulder and down your chest until your nipple was between my lips. My mouth covered all it could as I sucked on your sensitive nipple, lashing it with my tongue and gently biting it. Your fingers ran up my neck and entangled in my hair, pulling it to keep me close and direct me. You pulled me to the other breast, my teasing hardening each nipple all the more.

My hands rubbed up and down your legs, my passion grew all the more. I wanted to consume you, to make you a part of me. I could tell my feelings for you were changing. I love being with you but right now it is lust I feel, it is what directs my actions. I pressed you back onto the hood and my hands pulled at the lacey underwear I feel. You pressed me harder to your breast as your underwear slid down your thighs.

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Old 12th Nov 2007   #1
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Wonderful job Seker.....It's was more then I had expected and very much worth the wait....And while I might be a little on the prejudice side this one is my favorite ......so far anyway....... thanks for making my day ;-)
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Old 12th Nov 2007   #2
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OK, now that was worth a second read, which I did. You did a great job seker, seems you hit all the right spots at the right time and the story line was great...

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Old 13th Nov 2007   #3
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Awesome story, seker! Great detail, and the sex was hot! Great read!!
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Old 14th Nov 2007   #4
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Thank you all for your kind comments. I am really glad you enjoyed my little tale.

I hope you all have these types of dreams to give you perspective on those wonderful things you desire. I will continue to write when I have the time and most of my stories are really my deepest fantasies.

I am glad that I have met such a wonderful group of people and I can never thank you enough for the things you have done for me.
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Old 14th Nov 2007   #5
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Geez, after all the praise I gave you in private... I didn't realize I hadn't voiced in public! I love the emotion you show in this story. Clearly it is something from the heart. And... you know how I love details... great job!
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Wow, seker, this was beautiful! Romantic and hot all rolled together. I like these kinds of "dreamy" stories the most.
I like you easy style in this one. It just sorta "worked" with the content like a charm. Great job!
P. S. Wanna borrow my 98 clunker for the next time? We got lots of 'em up here where I live.
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