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| CHARTING THE CYBER SEA |
 8th Mar 2007 23:58
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| Nomadic mariners set adrift ~ faceless names in failing ships ~ endless tacks with little breeze ~ lonely barques on a cyber sea. Two bows brush in darkest night ~ two hands touch in briefest flight ~ two souls meet unwittingly ~ explorers adrift on a cyber sea. Two crafts merge as a single ship ~ wanderers joined in passion's grip ~ hidden spirit entities ~ loosely anchored on a cyber sea. Grasping sailors cling ‘til dawn ~ when breath and site both are gone. Love's mystery carved so brutally ~ forever separated on a cyber sea. Spectral lovers fleeing their pasts ~ two bleak futures lashed to the mast ~ return to port as love’s debris ~ floating…..burning on a cyber sea. | ||||||
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5th Apr 2007
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 411
|  Re: CHARTING THE CYBER SEA This is why i love ya lush, i only wish i could get my poems to be even halfway as good as this. Oh and i love the picture, i so understand it. |
 
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5th Apr 2007
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| Re: CHARTING THE CYBER SEA Oh, ty, cb! Anyone who would love my poem and see its meaning reflected in the ships ........ *sigh* My eyes fill with tears. I need to be in love.......... deep, passionate, heart palpitating love and lust! .... Is there anybody out there??? Where is your big brother?! |
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5th Apr 2007
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 2
| Re: CHARTING THE CYBER SEA You know I love this poem... and the picture... a dolphins view ... a perspective from another lifetime ..possibly... |
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6th Apr 2007
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 411
| Re: CHARTING THE CYBER SEA Anytime Lushi you dear friend. :-D the picture to to me, is two people talking but unable to get near to each other, the shimmering depicts the sometimes fragile nature of internet relationships, and how frustrating it can be. Hmmm maybe my imagination is too deep. |
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12th May 2007
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 4
| Re: CHARTING THE CYBER SEA Very evocative description...ships that pass in the night...a moment of insight, a touch, an elusive treasure found and lost...dissipating as it is grasped...and in the background the relentless, uncaring sea. |
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20th Jul 2007
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| mindspired Member  Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 23
| Re: CHARTING THE CYBER SEA "Skill'd in the globe and sphere, he gravely stands, And, with his compass, measures seas and lands." Nicely done Lushi! 8-) |
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11th May 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: CHARTING THE CYBER SEA Still a great piece of verse, years after its composition.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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2nd Mar 2010
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| Moderator  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,554
| Re: CHARTING THE CYBER SEA Says it all so well, so completely! It is both expressive and perfect as the beautiful poem that it is. You have captured the moment.
__________________ Spice is the wonder and excitement in your world. |
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