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Dance with me...
Old 1st Sep 2007 02:20
Baby
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Category: Poetry
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You asked to dance,
with a sweet little smile.

My body responds,
even before the touch.
A large calloused hand,
open, inviting mine.

The spark, the heat,
when the two came together.
Making me quiver,
loosing my timidness.

You guide me along,
to a dark, private corner.
My body, I can feel it,
as it leaves my brain.

Into your circle of arms,
molding as if we were one.

There is soft music I know,
smothered with the thump of your heart.
I rest my head there,
just under a chin.

As we move to the swell of our hearts,
bodies molded as one.
My lusty browns find their way into yours,
letting you see, know.

Into your circle of arms,
forever I will flow.
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Old 3rd Sep 2007   #1
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Excellent
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Old 3rd Sep 2007   #2
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Romantic, and sweet.
Keep dancing baby. Loved this.
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Old 3rd Sep 2007   #3
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Rather nice poem there Baby, keep it up. It was romantic with a hint of future possibility.
Thank you
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Old 15th Feb 2008   #4
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Just so lovely, it is precious. Je t'adore.
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