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 17th Apr 2007 12:51
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| DARK SECRETS Forbidden thrills are quickly born, The feel of warmth rushes, A breeze of guilt slowly drifts. Oh, what secrets lurk. Heated touches on lonely skin, Eyes meet and gazes hold, Suggested sins and kisses placed. Oh, dark secrets lurk. The joining of sweet flesh to flesh, Thoughts of wrongness flee, Dreams awaken to star filled night. Oh, what secrets lurk. Emotion quivers all around, Rushing bodies slide, Satisfaction now rules the soul. Oh, deep secrets lurk. Sated bodies strain together, Tears run down the cheek, Our unforgiven love floats free. Oh, what secrets lurk. Farewells made with a saddened haste, Fears of being found, Plans of future in pain ignored. Deep, dark secrets lurk. | ||||||
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18th Apr 2007
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
|  Re: Dark Secrets oh, sparky, that made me cry and feel fear as well as that ever so fleeting joy. ..... Captured very well. |
 
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18th Apr 2007
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 4
| Re: Dark Secrets Nice to see you here sparky! I enjoyed that poem...you talented thing you! |
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19th Apr 2007
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 411
| Re: Dark Secrets wowser, what a wonderful job you did with this |
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19th Apr 2007
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| mindspired Member  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Detroit Posts: 39
| Re: Dark Secrets beautiful and touching, Sparky....sensual, sad, erotic, emotional....you've really encapsulated it all in a very small space. thank you for sharing this. |
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11th May 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: Dark Secrets A thoughtful and pointed group of song-filled lines. Why does passion have to be so paradoxical? Must it be like the rest of life: bitter sweet? Good work!!
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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16th Jan 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In the Fantasy Forest Posts: 346
| Re: Dark Secrets Beautiful poem sparkylee, the lines sing of joy and fear. Emotions of reality dance and coiled in these lines and form visions in our minds. Beautifully done sparkylee.
__________________ If you could walk in the rain and not get wet would you enjoy it? |
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24th Jan 2010
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| Moderator  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
| Re: Dark Secrets Exceptional work. Perceptive words that capture many emotions.
__________________ Spice is the wonder and excitement in your world. |
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