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Discovery
Old 29th Apr 2009 06:22
wellbehavedlady
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Into watery depths
He finds safety
Not drowning
Security and shelter
A friend and lover
A sense of himself

Into watery depths
She finds love
Not despair
Caressing and comfort
A lover and friend
A sense of belonging

Into watery depths
They find peace
Not loneliness
Fun and laughter
Together
A sense of happiness
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Old 8th Jun 2009   #1
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Beautiful *smile*
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Old 12th Jun 2009   #2
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Masterfully written
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Old 28th Aug 2009   #3
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How perfectly presented! The beauty of friendship and love combined--what else could be finer? I loved your simple, yet profound words. The images you create are wonderful.
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