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 7th May 2007 07:00
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| Don’t You Know? You ask what I want as if we are in a pastry shoppe, as if I could say: two croissants, one chocolate and an old-fashioned, jelly roll to go. Always words fail me as the taste of desire feels my mouth and nose. What can I say other than nothing? What is this want? It's not like that, reluctantly breathing, as if I don't want. But I do need to be fed. Yet I go away empty, the void gnawing at me. I starve to put tongue to the emptiness and still the sounds remain silenced. I want to stalk the depths of your eyes yours plunging into mine beyond all images beyond all history into all wishes into all hopes. I want to forge all of your connections to me in the touch of your fingers in the texture of your mouth in the flow of your breath in the pulse of your blood. I want to be in tandem with you striding up the mountain-- careening down the other side. I want to fuse – you and me -- Spirit into spirit Aura eclipsing aura Controlling the feel of colors swirling, spinning into the unrecognizable shade of bliss. You are with me; my body feels. You love me, my spirit pulses in synch. You run away, my soul will be rent asunder. The body, spirit and soul never lie. Sex, ever vulnerable - fragile grafting. Don’t you know? | ||||||
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8th May 2007
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Clitterville Posts: 164
|  Re: Don't you know?? Lushi hon.. So deep, so much emotion all with one goal. I truly love everything you write, happy, sad, sexy as all hell or simple and sweet you get to the heart and soul of it everytime. There's but a few that truly hit the chords everytime they write something, but you never miss em'!! Clitters!! |
 
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11th May 2007
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In a house Posts: 9
| Re: Don't you know?? You are quite the wordsmith Lushi, You have covered the emotional relationships with the physical. Beautiful, you are still inspiring. |
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12th May 2007
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In the Fantasy Forest Posts: 346
| Re: Don't you know?? Great poem lushi, nicely done just beautiful. :0) |
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28th May 2007
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 32
| Re: Don't you know?? That one consumed me, Lush. Excellent ~ excellent. |
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29th May 2007
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 411
| Re: Don't you know?? the first two lines got me, "You ask what I want as if we are in a pastry shoppe" perfect start to a perfect poem |
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2nd Jun 2007
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Eastern Pennsylvania Posts: 98
| Re: Don't you know?? Sometimes a single word can speak the volumes of a lone rose, a single touch, a kiss, a glance: all contributing to the communication between lovers. The arrangement of words and images you’ve presented here Lushi, is so much more, like a grand floral bouquet at the foot of a bed two people share. Yeah, I can get downright sappy sometimes…and something like this can bring it out. |
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4th Aug 2007
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| mindspired Member  Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 1
| Re: Don't you know?? yummy- made me hungry.... :lol: |
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4th Aug 2007
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 150
| Re: Don't you know?? Lush I have read this over and over again and always amazed by your writing abilities and the way that you are able to express your feelings. Then I ask myself why you haven't published some of your works? I can't answer that question so now I ask you. :-D |
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18th Feb 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: Don't you know?? "Damned good" is an understatement.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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