Drip

peppercorn · 22nd Jun 2010

Msleo10 wrote:

Drip

i spread my
royalty
before him

let the scent
of my passion
drift into
his nostrils

he inhales
then exhales
blowing against
my juicy
cherry

i gasp
as his fingers
probe between
my lips

moans move towards
my tongue
but before they can
be released
he replaces his
fingers

puts his mouth
in position
of power

so damn
hot

i ride his face
like its a
roller coaster
going over every
hill and valley
of his etched
brilliance

i rotate my
hips
buck like a
bronco
creating friction
between his
mouth
and my
moist
perfection

faster
and faster
his tongue
goes deeper
and deeper
and i release
wet
sticky

with the sweets of
my inner beauty
running
down my thighs

hitting the
floor

with
a
drip.

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I hope I divided it okay -- wanted to make it easier for others to read.
This is a delicious erotic poem. It has an intensity and a flow that is wonderful.
I enjoyed reading this and I loved your style. Great job! Thanks for sharing it.

Dionysius · 12th Jul 2010

Thank you for arranging this Pepper!
MsLeo, this is so beautifully sensual, and displays a real sense of how a woman feels when she is engaged "lips to lips" with a lover. It is so sweet, lovely, and so alive.
Your main character seems to be very well endowed with a sensitive femininity and well developed fluids. I myself find the subject of this poem a great gift and aesthetically very lovely.
So I enjoyed this more than most perhaps.
You can write!

22nd Jun 2010	#1
peppercorn Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,554	Re: Drip Msleo10 wrote: Drip i spread my royalty before him let the scent of my passion drift into his nostrils he inhales then exhales blowing against my juicy cherry i gasp as his fingers probe between my lips moans move towards my tongue but before they can be released he replaces his fingers puts his mouth in position of power so damn hot i ride his face like its a roller coaster going over every hill and valley of his etched brilliance i rotate my hips buck like a bronco creating friction between his mouth and my moist perfection faster and faster his tongue goes deeper and deeper and i release wet sticky with the sweets of my inner beauty running down my thighs hitting the floor with a drip. ------------------------------------------------ I hope I divided it okay -- wanted to make it easier for others to read. This is a delicious erotic poem. It has an intensity and a flow that is wonderful. I enjoyed reading this and I loved your style. Great job! Thanks for sharing it. __________________ Spice is the wonder and excitement in your world.

12th Jul 2010	#2
Dionysius Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939	Re: Drip Thank you for arranging this Pepper! MsLeo, this is so beautifully sensual, and displays a real sense of how a woman feels when she is engaged "lips to lips" with a lover. It is so sweet, lovely, and so alive. Your main character seems to be very well endowed with a sensitive femininity and well developed fluids. I myself find the subject of this poem a great gift and aesthetically very lovely. So I enjoyed this more than most perhaps. You can write! __________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog)