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Gentle
Old 23rd May 2008 13:33
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Category: Poetry
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Your tender lips upon my skin,
The soft touch of your lips,
Sensations ripened on golden wings,
Sighing wherever have you been?


Inside me now the waves do rise
building, building, with awesome force.
Passions joining in a rushing flood.
Guiding the fever in your eyes.


The heat, the fire, the promise,
of never ending pleasure,
in your arms I lay
we have only touched the surface.


The bend of my knee,
the curve of your lips,
The sweetness of your kiss,
The rocking in our hips.


I know now what it means,
To be joined in body as one.
To join another in joy,
bursting with it at the seams.


I love you so in this time,
I love you so in the next.
I will love you in my heart
I know your love is mine.


I feel the moment building,
The tensions in us rise,
The waves are getting closer,
I'm drowning in your eyes.


And as the crest does take me
I arch into your thrust,
Your body spasms into mine
And in your arms I cry.
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Old 26th May 2008   #1
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Lovely and touching ending to a gradual hopeful build up.
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Old 30th May 2008   #2
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Great work!!
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Old 30th May 2008   #3
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This was great Dai - nice work!

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Old 11th Jun 2008   #4
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SWEET! I look forward to reading more by you.
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