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How Do You Know When Your Heart Breaks?
Old 8th May 2007 07:30
firefightinangel
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How do you know when your heart breaks?

It's simple really, the emptiness surrounds you till you just want to scream.

The ripping feeling emitting from your heart is unbearable,
the tearing of your soul leaves a sick and twisted feeling in your stomach that does not go away.

You cry, and you cry until there is nothing left and you feel as though your shedding dust from your eyes.

You may do things normally you would not do.

All for the sake of the love you've lost, or in so many ways a love you never will or feel you have.

For all the talking in the world cannot fix what's been done, you cannot take back words that have been already spoken, things that have already been done.

For those that have had this heartbreak I say to you, you may feel as though you've found your one but as I have learned, many of us NEVER find that one, because there is no ONE for us.

You may have felt it, you may have thought it but feelings and thinking do nothing but cloud the judgment, the better judgment that you've relied on for so long to see you through.
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Old 10th May 2007   #1
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Oh, dearest angel......... It is there. Be patient and it will surprise you, your heart will become airborne and function better at higher altitudes! We were not meant for full earth gravity, darlin!
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Old 10th May 2007   #2
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i like it angel. a broken a heart suckx.
but our hearts arent made to be broken ,
they are made to be mended and full of love.






carguy what we do in love echoes in eternity
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Old 9th Feb 2008   #3
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Oh sweet Angel.

What a beautiful sentiment....and I too wonder if you are right myself....I keep falling....pick myself up....and start all over again as the song goes. Ya get so much, so suddenly that you want to believe, then you do believe, and sooner or later after that....the other goes.....
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