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Hunger
Old 15th Dec 2009 20:29
peppercorn
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Tasting softly,
I walk my lips,
Nibbling upwards,
Toward his knee.
A lingering moment,
A teasing breath,
A delicate kiss,
A sigh as he
Begins responding--
Oh, so hot,
His legs a-tremble,
As I eat
My sweet way higher,
Climbing up
To claim reward,
My love, so sweet.
My mouth,
So hungry--
So enticed,
I cannot wait
To fill my needs.
Thinking now's
The perfect time
For making love--
See where it leads.
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Old 28th Dec 2009   #1
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A gripping journey of enticement. Yep the guy is lucky as hell...hehe


Solid work
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Old 29th Dec 2009   #2
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mmmm makes me want to have a little fun like that myself *smile*
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Old 29th Dec 2009   #3
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Wow this is a very hot poem. You have wonderful talent. Thanks for sharing it.
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Old 31st Dec 2009   #4
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Peppercorn says:
Thinking now's
The perfect time
For making love--
See where it leads.

I know that path, it should lead to cookies and cream and screams of delight echoing through the night. A hot bath and scented candles would add to the delight.

A lovely poetic journey peppercorn liked it a lot.
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Old 1st Jan 2010   #5
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I don't know if you're attempting to tease me to death or relating an experience, but whatever you're goal, you're doing a great job.
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Old 17th Feb 2010   #6
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as you always been, it's very great poem.
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Old 31st Jul 2010   #7
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If your are really hungry, hopefully it will lead all the way to dessert...
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