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 25th Jan 2009 19:49
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| In a Moment I'm chilled from the sight of you We touch....we ignite I'm warmed from the flames of our passion Our heat lifts us....we rise higher and higher The moonlight caresses our bodies, while our touch Caresses our soul
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27th Jan 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
|  Re: In a Moment Wow......I am not usually a poetry person, but that was great! Keep up the good work, hun! xoxo
__________________ Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like you do when nobody is watching! |
 
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4th Feb 2009
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| Chat Moderators  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Re: In a Moment I loved it ..... *hugs & kisses*
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19th Feb 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: In a Moment See! I knew you had it in ya buddy! That was really good stuff!! Congratulations.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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10th Mar 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: the shadows Posts: 390
| Re: In a Moment Thank you all for your kind words.....just a scribbler trying to find his voice
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28th Aug 2009
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| Moderator  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,554
| Re: In a Moment Excellent imagery! Nicely done.
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