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| Across this land of broken hearts Where lives lay in shattered parts Across this land of dark lost dreams Where hopes are torn at the seams My journey begins, I travel alone With no idea of which way home My journey begins, my soul is light Yet to learn how hard the fight A few steps in, I can feel the pain Of others fallen beneath the strain A few steps in, I can barely breathe Already I want to surrender, to leave My heart drawn on, called by another I continue forward, toward my lover My heart drawn on, I cannot resist For promised love, I will persist Weight on my spirit brings me down I won't give in, I will not drown Weight on my spirit I fight to lift Strength to go on to loves true gift Across this land of broken hearts Where lives lay in broken parts Across this land my journey done I rest in the arms of my loved one | ||||||
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| Comments to Story: Love's journey. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Illinois Posts: 416
| This is a rather nice little piece Dukky. And in many ways does symbolize what many oft go through to find love. Thank you dear. |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| Nice one, wuks, especially for those who are afraid to tread the ground again after being hurt before. |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 3
| Sweet job! Ryhme, rythem and meaning a true poem. 3 licks from me. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Very sensitive and remarkably brave dukky. How can it not evoide a tear, then a happy one at the end?
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