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Love's journey.
Old 6th Aug 2007 02:20
dukky
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Across this land of broken hearts

Where lives lay in shattered parts

Across this land of dark lost dreams

Where hopes are torn at the seams



My journey begins, I travel alone

With no idea of which way home

My journey begins, my soul is light

Yet to learn how hard the fight



A few steps in, I can feel the pain

Of others fallen beneath the strain

A few steps in, I can barely breathe

Already I want to surrender, to leave



My heart drawn on, called by another

I continue forward, toward my lover

My heart drawn on, I cannot resist

For promised love, I will persist



Weight on my spirit brings me down

I won't give in, I will not drown

Weight on my spirit I fight to lift

Strength to go on to loves true gift



Across this land of broken hearts

Where lives lay in broken parts

Across this land my journey done

I rest in the arms of my loved one
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Old 6th Aug 2007   #1
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This is a rather nice little piece Dukky. And in many ways does symbolize what many oft go through to find love. Thank you dear.
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Old 6th Aug 2007   #2
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Nice one, wuks, especially for those who are afraid to tread the ground again after being hurt before.
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Old 9th Jan 2008   #3
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Sweet job! Ryhme, rythem and meaning a true poem. 3 licks from me.
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Old 17th Feb 2008   #4
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Very sensitive and remarkably brave dukky. How can it not evoide a tear, then a happy one at the end?
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