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| Memories By Ravenquill It seems almost a fantasy, A mist within my mind, Of one so near in private thought Yet far away in time. Of skin so soft and tender That tightened at a kiss To softly rippled wonders With dark and turgid tips. Of roundness, ripe and fertile So smooth and yet so tight. Of secret silky tresses That hid her cleft from sight Her private lips were moist with dew, Their fragrance musky-tart. My fingertips stroked satin skin. I felt them slowly part. My manhood straining up in need, Of woman’s primal gift, Yet waiting for the sounds and feel The sigh, the lifting of her hips. My entry, slow and gentle ‘Til cradled ‘tween her thighs, The world became just her and I Locked in that ancient tie. Her hands caressed my body, Her panting breath, my face. Her lips mouthed quiet murmurs. Her thighs embraced my waist. First slow, then fast, then faster still As flickers turned to flames, Then blazed to the inferno That cannot have a name. Her kisses took away my breath Then filled me with her own. Her body writhed beneath me. She arched her back and moaned. In that exquisite union, As old as time itself, We climbed the heights of ecstasy And teetered on the shelf. My straining thrusts, returned in kind That pushed me to her depths. Her grasping sheath upon my staff The heaving of our chests. Her nails dug hard into my back, Her hips began to twist, Then shuddering together We fell in the abyss. Her cry was soft and pleading as She told me of her need. I pulled her body to me And filled her with my seed. We lay there in the quiet Still locked in that embrace Her hands stroked up and down my back. Her lips caressed my face. The memory still lingers there, Floating through my mind. That night when I was twenty-one, And she was thirty-nine. | ||||||
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| Moderator Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,554
| That was such a great poem, Ravenquil! You told a story with such wonderful rhyme. I especially loved your line, 'The world became just her and I'. It says what making love is all about. I really enjoyed reading this poetic piece of magic. Thanks. -------pepper
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: the shadows Posts: 390
| Wow! impressive tale of passion. Such a vivid memory. Hmmm this has stirred a few of my own.....smiles Thank you for sharing
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| Chat Moderators Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| Beautiful Raven *smile* thank you ...
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 387
| Amazing, is all I can say! It really took my breath away!
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In the Fantasy Forest Posts: 346
| Beautiful poem ravenquill, the elusive mist of pleasure captured in a rhyme. I’m waiting for your next one but it’s hard to see from here how you can surpass these lines, but poetry is an ether that comes to rest on mind and memory and gently caress our thoughts that flow more fluid from mind to hand to pen. Thanks for posting Memories
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