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| Mouthing Excitement |
 24th Aug 2009 22:28
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| A fleeting taste. A tingling lick. A gentle touch, My heart is quick. * My mouth, it savors A treat so fine. I sense arousal, The wetness, mine. * I travel upwards, The prize on top. My mouth, it nibbles-- I cannot stop. * A pleasure great, Connects us two. My hands massaging Right on cue. * A flick of tongue-- It circles, soft. My eyes look down, My head aloft. * I take a breath-- Back down I go, And travel back My tongue, below. * One final draw, Before I'm knowing. The sweet elixir-- Passions flowing. * A savory swallow, And then I'm done. A gentle kiss, My thanks for fun. | ||||||
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3rd Sep 2009
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| Chat Moderators  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
|  Re: Mouthing Excitement very nice Pepper 
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3rd Sep 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Re: Mouthing Excitement Love the images this leaves one with...great job, pepper!
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12th Oct 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In the Fantasy Forest Posts: 346
| Re: Mouthing Excitement Very beautiful presentation Pepper, each image finds a resting place just right with each fame, the tension mounts, the images sizzle in my mind. Thanks for writing that.
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1st Jan 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Tennessee Posts: 232
| Re: Mouthing Excitement If I can almost feel it, it has to be well written...and I can. |
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