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| My First |
 13th Jun 2008 10:57
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| Sweet dreams are in store for you loving and playing together. Enjoyment and pleasure too. Being in your arms forever, Kisses and hugs beyond measure Passion that is never ending. Giving and receiving pure pleasure. Flowing like a river so winding. Hands so gentle and a touch so true Caressing and touching me The pleasure so new Sensations blinding me. Slowly and Easily you guide me into your world of feeling. Showing me what to see Opening up a world full of healing. My woman hood so new to me Wondering what is happening inside. The desire in my eyes you see The yearning I cannot hide. With hands so strong and yet so pleasing You pry my knees apart. With a tounge so teasing, You teach me that oh so ancient art. I become wet and wanting, A throbbing centers in my core, You continue giving and not taking, Leaving me begging for more. Your manhood I see for the first time, A little fear I feel inside, But with a reassuring smile You enter with an easy glide. An even pace you set To accustom me to your length. Each thrust well and gladly met. I marvel at your will and strength. In no hurry not at all Slow and steady Rubbing my inner walls The feel makes me heady. Gradually getting faster, The pressure does increase. A slowly building pressure, Begging for release. The tingles they begin, From my head down to my toes. Vibrating from within, Even in my nose. My fingers grasp the sheet, My body arcs into you. I cry out your name in the heat, Of my first climax never to be beat. Many more that night I had, seven to be exact. Each one closer to driving me mad. But my first one was not to be beat and that is a fact.
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14th Jun 2008
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Baltimore County Posts: 22
|  Re: My First crisp poetic voice, interesting and unique arrangement of words and flow... well done. 
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14th Jun 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
|  Re: My First This nearly transcendent song delights in the diverse play of the erotic, breaking smooth rhythm into a breath-taking emergence of joy in poetic collage. It is a very lovely piece, naming and singing the song of its instigator and his partner in their mutual joy. What a beautiful piece bitch!! I love it!
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18th Jun 2008
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| Vintage Author Join Date: May 2008 Location: Maryland Posts: 12
|  Re: My First When I read seven, I was like omg she will be forever addicted. That may have been her first but there will be a 2nd, a 3rd, a 4th, and so on and so on and so on. I love where it took my imagination.
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