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| On Elliptical Orbits |
 27th Apr 2007 17:10
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| Each time I fall in love again I change The orbit of my soul and feel the range Of gravity’s rainbow so rich and strong That my heart’s fiery core warns me it's wrong. To submit so completely to the force My sense of what is right and alter course From free and independent future life That stems my need to be again a wife. I pray back to a ring of no ellipse, Only to turn on dreams of your firm lips. Oh, I cling to the orbit of my space As I plant sweet kisses upon your face. Curse your arms that wrap our collisions done, The fatal draw that pulls me to the sun. | ||||||
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29th Apr 2007
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 2
|  Re: On Elliptical Orbits .... very nice Jane....makes me wonder.....? |
 
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29th Apr 2007
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 32
| Re: On Elliptical Orbits I love the imagery you provide - we are all bodies in motion in the universe... May you encounter peace and happiness in your orbit. |
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18th Feb 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: On Elliptical Orbits So true PJ!!!! Did you know there is a song called "That Lucky Old Sun?"
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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12th Apr 2008
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| Re: On Elliptical Orbits jane, again a great look at a very complex question... do we have to assume a "subservient" role to enjoy our sexuality.... or am i missing the boat here? lol still liked it!
__________________ You do not have to be good. You do not have to walk on your knees for a hundred miles through the desert repenting. You only have to let the soft animal of your body love what it loves. |
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13th Apr 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: East Coast Posts: 21
| Re: On Elliptical Orbits I am so glad you like this and some of my other poetry Lushi, it means a lot to me. In this one I tried to talk about the choice and balance between independence and that of giving oneself away completely to love. It was awkward, I guess.
__________________ Babe In Total Control of Herself! |
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18th Apr 2008
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: On Elliptical Orbits ...it is risky yes Jane... dangerous and promising at the same time..... you can become subject to the "us" the two of you create, but the danger is you become submissive to another "ego" who holds back from making an "us" with you. Sadly, you only find that out in retrospect, hurting..... But when you are under the spell of an "us" it is so enchanting, and erotically powerful!!! I love this poem as I said earlier.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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6th Sep 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Eastern Pennsylvania Posts: 98
| Re: On Elliptical Orbits After your interview I came back to read this poem again and realized I never gave it a comment. It deserves a comment for it was even more enjoyable now understanding the context of the conflicts presented here. Lucky is the guy who redirected your orbit to be around him Planet_Jane!
__________________ "One man's vulgarity is another's lyric." -- John Marshall Harlan, Supreme Court justice, 1971 |
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