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| One Soul |
 25th Aug 2009 01:25
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| He guides my spirit With no need of a map. He lifts my imagination Enabling it to soar. He shares in my pleasures, I share in his joys. He is mine, and I am his. Our journey is excitement, Our experiences glow; Our sorrows, bittersweet, Their remedies make us stronger. We love, and dissolve into each other. His world is my safety, My love is his strength He appreciates with wonder. I admire his talents. I yearn for more, his giving is limitless. His hands sear my body, His tongue is my treat. My mouth is his harmony, My fingers shoot his stars Our words reverberate our love. We join in our passion, Our journey is far. Blended and melted, We have no boundary. Together our souls alight as one. | ||||||
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3rd Sep 2009
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| Chat Moderators  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
|  Re: One Soul very beautiful ...truely heartfelt
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3rd Sep 2009
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Re: One Soul What a beautiful poem. You can feel the emotion.
__________________ Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like you do when nobody is watching! |
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5th Sep 2009
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| Moderator  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,554
| Re: One Soul This is one poem that is very special to me. I am glad that you enjoyed it.
__________________ Spice is the wonder and excitement in your world. |
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1st Jan 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Tennessee Posts: 232
| Re: One Soul I'd say he's a very lucky guy, both for the way your feel and for the way you express it. I like blank verse, and this was very nice. |
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