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Old 16th Jun 2008 10:47
Jequiche
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Told me she wasn’t into


Exploitation


And I didn’t know what buttons to push at first


So I had to deal with a little frustration


I assured her that I wouldn’t reiterate any information


It would stay where we decided to place it


So she opened up wider to give me proper visitation


Of course after a brief moment of hesitation I isolated the


Situation


Grabbed her hand and led her into the back for a proper


Operation


Knew I had to work slowly at first in order to deliver her unspoken


Expectation


And even though she didn’t say a word I knew from her heart’s palpitations


That her body was under preparation for my


Stimulation


First things first—give her proper relaxation


Before I knew what was happening her breathing underwent a different


Transformation


It became labored and heavy as our bodies got sweaty


From the navigation of my tongue long the contour of her throne


I’m a tease so I leave the final destination alone for a minute

Because I wasn’t finished and I needed her to yield every fiber to me—I demanded her, “stay right here on your knees,” as I slowly rose but not too fast before I looked in those big brown eyes
I could see the desperation behind her eyes which told me that she was burning

Between her thighs


And suddenly, I stood tall up against the wall, one foot on the chair, waving her over here, “Come closer to me”


As she crawled over on her knees I could feel my kitty-kat


D


R


I


P


P


I


N


G


Started masturbation before her mouth and my kitty-kat had their private conversation about the entire presentation that I came with


She looks up at me and says, “Aint this some shit! A tease got me on my knees doing all the work”


I look down at her offering an explanation but all she says is


Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


And with that, she pumped me into a trance


It was so intense I had to use the muscles in my ass


To hold back my wave ‘cus I was coming too fast


But before the termination she gave me acceleration


And if you use your imagination maybe you can picture this:


Her tongue twisted around my thumb


Licking off my cum


Pulling me down some


So now we are face to face


Eyes communicating


Negotiating who would take which place


Top or bottom,


Me to her,


69,


Kat to face


She started right away


But I was so worn I had to recuperate


As I relaxed on my back she began to penetrate


My thoughts relocate


My drive regenerates


My stamina rejuvenates


My mouth eliminates her juices


Her hand deviate my position


But I hold her tight ‘cus I’m a pro and I know there aint a spot I’m missing


I’m focused on the relation of my body to hers


Location of the spot


Modification of the rhythm


Simplification of what I was giving


Harmonization of the notes she played to me


My standardization of the melody


Equalization of the wave


Illumination of the stage


The final chapter of the page


Success in my obligation of giving proper compensation


For the acceleration she gave to me


Our combination of desires—water and fire


I put out her flame as she warmed my water


Such dedication…


Such concentration…


Such stimulation…


Now all we need is a little recuperation…
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Old 16th Jun 2008   #1
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Wow!! That was so very descriptive and hot! I love the sentence structure, too!
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Old 16th Jun 2008   #2
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Hmmmm well at the risk of sounding like a copy cat lol I fully agree with what Kitty said great job
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Old 16th Jun 2008   #3
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Wonderfully written! Excellent word play and harmony going on there. It was hot loved it. keep it up.
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Old 18th Jun 2008   #4
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I am speechless! Beautiful!
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