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| Pleasure Dawning |
 30th Jun 2008 15:12
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| Pleasure or Pain? It's a borderline thing. Sometimes Pain is pleasure. Sometimes pleasure is pain. Pressure gentle or strong, done in various places. Done for short or long, wonderful embraces. The gentle touch of your lips, upon my brow, upon my cheek, upon my breast. Tracing the gentle swell of my hips, Oh which do I like the best? When you nibble my nipples When you bite on my ear, it sends pleasure in ripples almost too much to bare. So much of you to feel, so much of you to touch, can this be real? Oh how I love you so much So much of you to take so much of you to know so much love to make The climax so slow to grow waves and crests wash over me tingles in my breasts Oh I finally see The point of the act The pleasure of doing this thing Is a plain out right fact | ||||||
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30th Jun 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
|  Re: Pleasure Dawning Nicely constructed poem B. I like the way it starts out in one place and ends up with a conclusion.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
 
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1st Jul 2008
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Baltimore County Posts: 22
|  Re: Pleasure Dawning I enjoyed the sounds of this piece, good job. 
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8th Jul 2008
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6
|  Re: Pleasure Dawning nice words expression its enhance the pleasure of having pain or pleasure thanks for stimulating writ8ing |
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7th Oct 2008
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: Pleasure Dawning This is ever so sensual and opening to pleasure. I like the way it picks central areas of pleasure and how both people start in different places they still are open to each other and as the poetess says, she loves her lover oh so much. An endearing piece.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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13th May 2010
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| Moderator  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,556
| Re: Pleasure Dawning I liked this very much. Lovely lines, thanks.
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