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Pure Delight
Old 21st May 2008 06:24
wellbehavedlady
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His beast sleeps unaware
But with my gift
He will awake
I lick him slowly
How I love the taste
Watching him rise
Standing to attention
No words can explain
What that sight can do
My hidden folds tingle
My lips explore
Savouring each lap
Following the ripples
So soft the skin
Taking him all
Sucking him in
Going so deep
Feeling him throb
His crown seeps
As my senses yearn
Shall I be selfish
How I want him so
I bring him to orgasm
A pure delight
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Old 21st May 2008   #1
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Great job... very well written
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Old 22nd May 2008   #2
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Nice, wbl! Those are so fun to give, are they not??
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Old 22nd May 2008   #3
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Wow WBL!
That could be one of the best short poems I've ever read... very moving... and I think you can guess in what direction... lol
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Old 27th May 2008   #4
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One of my favorite subjects! Nicely done! Flows nicely and with good timing.
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