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 10th Apr 2010 12:57
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| <div id="Cleaner"><div id="Cleaner"><div id="Cleaner"><div id="Cleaner"><div id="Cleaner"> <div id="Cleaner"> <div id="Cleaner">Coaxing out the sunshine, Drawing out the dew-- Loving you in springtime Is what I want with you. Spending time in fragrance, With flowers open wide, Showing you my secret spot And letting you inside. So join with me in reverie, I'll make my thrills join yours. And share with me a brand new world, Of springtime and outdoors.
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16th Apr 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: In the Fantasy Forest Posts: 346
|  Re: SPRINGTIME Very nice springtime poem peppercorn. Keep up the good work.
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18th Apr 2010
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| mindspired Member  Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Melbourne Australia Posts: 292
| Re: SPRINGTIME Dear Pepper, So beautifully crafted, and how personal it would be to each person who reads it. |
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6th May 2010
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: SPRINGTIME It is not only beautifully and appreciatively worded, but it has a kind of balance about it that really makes it work. Very talented worked Pepper. Certainly opens up the promise of Spring and Maying.
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31st Jul 2010
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| mindspired Member  Join Date: May 2010 Location: Fantasy Land, USA. Posts: 63
| Re: SPRINGTIME It's more like summer here...but, I think we can still make it work...
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