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| Laying alone in the darkness, Hiding in the shadows of night. The soft sound of footsteps, give me such a fright. The outline of a man i see, Standing in my doorway. He walks slowly over, And my breath he steals from me. I felt the gentle pressure, Of his weight upon my bed. The so familiar heat, From long denied pleasure. His hand above my skin, not touching just skimming. I feel the heat of his body, Through my gown so thin. It has been so long for me, I have been so alone. I am afraid yet not, Of the man i cannot see. Then i catch a scent, so familiar and so tender. This cannot be i shudder, As his hand slides to my knee just bent. I cannot see who this is, But peace and calm i feel, along with desire well hidden, and divisible bands of steal. He starts with my ankles, glides up my calf so light, his gentle touch like shackles, holding me so tight. Not with force or pain, but with touch and feeling. My muscles melt, with every inch he is moving. To my knee and then my thigh, He moves with no hurry, causing a throb that starts in my womb, and moves to a puddle and then i sigh. On up into me, he caresses my lips, so wet and swollen, he pushes in his fingertips. and stops for a moment. Letting me see that no force he will use, if i want i must beg, for his touch i will plead. A cry escapes me, saying please touch me there. A deeper he goes inside me, harder and without care. grasping at his wrist i beg him to take me now, not caring who he was, not caring when or how. But a finger he withdraws dripping drops of me and puts it to my lips telling me to be calm His lips replace his hands in his easy play his tounge a torment of pleasure and of pain flicking his tounge inside me licking and sucking at me now making me squirm and wiggle gasping though not sure how or why He stands up so silently and sheds his clothing to the floor going across the room he gently closes the door He comes back to me in moments and covers my body with his Gently he spreads my thighs With his leg and hips I can feel his throbbing manhood upon my stomach tight. The tension in my grows Like the moon on a dark dark night With one thrust he shatters me in pleasure and delight. so full and tender He sunders me with his might pushing in and out, with gentleness and strength building me once again to that mount of stars so bright still his scent teases me clinging to my skin mixing with our sweat, and just silently sinking in With his lips upon my throat one hand grasping my breast one final lunge he made To guide us to the crest And at the moment of utmost pleasure I come down from that high He cups my face so tender, reigning kisses on my eyes. He brings his lips down to my ears, and then i wake in my bed all alone with his smell all around me, and his voice i softly hear, I love you BG, and on my pillow is my tears. | ||||||
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 23
| WOW.....absolutely brilliant, intense, loving, sensual mmmm what a lovely dream.
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| Chat Moderators Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
| nice job bitch .....I look forward to more from you
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Good job! WBL got tht right...such feeling, and sensuality. Hope to see more from you.
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Utterly beautiful. The whole rhythmic telling of us. From motion to motion, emotion to emotion. Veru touching aND EFFECTIVE.
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Sorry for the typos above. I almost couldn't see when I typed it [I am partially blind]. Here it is again edited hours later when I discovered it: Utterly beautiful. The whole rhythmic telling of it to us, flowing from motion to motion, emotion to emotion: It was very touching and effective. I was deeply moved. Again, sorry for the edit.
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: the shadows Posts: 390
| Excellent .......I could feel the instensity
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