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| The Flight of the Rose |
 25th Apr 2007 22:40
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| The Flight of the Rose By SlowHand Oh, oh my head so aroused upon a shaft, rosy red, throbbing in power with centered slit, finds its hovering perch above love's trembling bud. A sweet erection so eager in its cavern's open embrace. Hips of quaking energy strain to surround throbbing shaft. Rosy red, two undulating mounds find and ignite, the quaking motion, a pearl enchanted. Two heaving chests, breathless, straining, fall and rise. Two earthquakes launch, geysers hot, tall and high. Two bodies thrash and float, suspended in one emotion. High above the heavens, falling arrow spires in G-gravity pins limp shaft rosy red to quaking, bursting in full bloom, the treasure throbbing there, collapsing in pink delight. Two heavenly bodies exhaustedly entwined in floating weightlessness. A spent embrace from the flight of the rose. | ||||||
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27th Apr 2007
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
|  Re: The Flight of the Rose Slow, this was very lovely and full of vivid images. Thank you for writing it! Lushi |
 
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27th Sep 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: The Flight of the Rose Very suggestive and carefully chosen images that tell a story in a poem. Wonderful.
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13th Sep 2009
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| Moderator  Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Frolicking in the woods. Posts: 1,554
| Re: The Flight of the Rose Incredible emotion and imagery in carefully chosen words. A beautiful read. Thank you.
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28th Sep 2009
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| Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 1
| Re: The Flight of the Rose Loved every word . . |
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