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| The Lady and The Whore |
 27th Mar 2008 18:05
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| The Lady and The Whore Sweet cunning is required of us ladies Since of chastity men are enemies. The way mountain peaks beguile, so virtue Irresistibly draws men to undo. They expend wild charms seducing us girls; Gifts of perfume, fine flattery and pearls. Appealing to our trust and vanity They plumb our depths of lust and sanity, And fan our desires to corrupt the night With natural delights that give hearts flight. These sexy acts of love I do enjoy But fear sometimes they make me but a toy. So though in bed I am a naughty Whore, A Lady by day does my soul restore
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28th Mar 2008
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| Chat Moderators  Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Dover , De Posts: 1,392
|  Re: The Lady and The Whore Good job ........ I really enjoyed it......... thank you 
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31st Mar 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: The Lady and The Whore Oh Jane this is so charming!! A whore by night and a proper saint by day it is? Hmmm...and us men are the naughty *prods* that stir your soup? Oh my! Just give me 5 minutes by day Jane baby to test your musical affirmations.....lol I loved it Jane!!...it charmed me. Thank you for making your metamorphizing angelic nature manifest in song!
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2nd Apr 2008
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| Inspired Author  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the cream Posts: 1,191
| Re: The Lady and The Whore What is that saying? Something about men wanting a lady by day but a whore in the bedroom at night......you have captured that beautifully here, Jane. Great work! Makes me want to be so saintly by day but oh so naughty at night......
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10th Apr 2008
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Re: The Lady and The Whore Quote:
__________________ "Its not easy, being green...but green's the color of Spring...it's beautiful, and I think it's what I wanna be." (Kermit the frog) | |
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12th Apr 2008
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| Vintage Author  Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Not in Kansas Posts: 385
| Re: The Lady and The Whore really like this concept, jane, and would love to see you explore it in more depth. could get some great imagery and comparisons going here. again, really like the concept mucho!
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27th Jun 2008
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Baltimore County Posts: 22
| Re: The Lady and The Whore One word--Exceptional! I give this one 3 stars. 
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