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The Need
Old 21st May 2008 06:26
wellbehavedlady
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An aching in my soul
A need to embrace him
So gentle
His embrace captures me
His need overcomes
So strong

The longing in my body
A need to feel him deep
So powerful
He thrusts into me
My need surrounds him
So beautiful

A wanting in our mind
A need to make it real
So explosive
Making it real
The need still there
So wonderful
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Old 21st May 2008   #1
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beautiful
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Old 22nd May 2008   #2
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One can never have enough, can they? You expressed it so well, wbl!
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Old 22nd May 2008   #3
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Very nice indeed. =)
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Old 12th Jun 2008   #4
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This is short and sweet, very beautiful. Well done.
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Old 29th Mar 2010   #5
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In a few short words you have conveyed powerful feelings and said so very much. Well done!
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