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Two as one.
Old 15th Apr 2007 03:04
cabinboy
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Your flesh excites me, covered by a thin sheen of sweat
I look down upon you, covered by a thin sheen of sweat
Hips buck against me, covered by thin sheen of sweat

Breasts bounce to the rhythm of lust, covered by a thin sheen of sweat
Your hands pull on my hips, covered by a thin sheen of sweat
Building to orgasm, tingling with lust, covered by a thin sheen of sweat

Two orgasms become one, covered by a thin sheen of sweat
Shuddering, convulsing, covered by a thin sheen of sweat
Panting, screaming, we hold onto each other, covered by a thin sheen of sweat.
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Old 15th Apr 2007   #1
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Very Cool

Evocative imagery here. I think the repetition works here to set the pace. Nicely done in a difficult genre.
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Old 15th Apr 2007   #2
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mmmm, CB...elicits a sumptuous and intense image...and an emotional response.
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Old 15th Feb 2008   #3
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Whew!! Very intense. Made me break into a thi9n sheen of sweat!!
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