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| Your flesh excites me, covered by a thin sheen of sweat I look down upon you, covered by a thin sheen of sweat Hips buck against me, covered by thin sheen of sweat Breasts bounce to the rhythm of lust, covered by a thin sheen of sweat Your hands pull on my hips, covered by a thin sheen of sweat Building to orgasm, tingling with lust, covered by a thin sheen of sweat Two orgasms become one, covered by a thin sheen of sweat Shuddering, convulsing, covered by a thin sheen of sweat Panting, screaming, we hold onto each other, covered by a thin sheen of sweat. | ||||||
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| Comments to Story: Two as one. |
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| Vintage Author Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 4
| Very Cool Evocative imagery here. I think the repetition works here to set the pace. Nicely done in a difficult genre. |
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| mindspired Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Detroit Posts: 39
| mmmm, CB...elicits a sumptuous and intense image...and an emotional response. |
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| Inspired Author Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: New England Posts: 939
| Whew!! Very intense. Made me break into a thi9n sheen of sweat!!
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